Aek khat bheega sa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Aek khat bheega sa

YuN to tumhey har mosam meiN hum likhtey rahey heiN laakhoN khat
is baar magar saawan rut meiN jo khat hum tum ko likheiN ge
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna tum
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna ke usey tum sey bohat kuch kehna hey
har lafz kahey ga tum sey kuch, tum suntey rehna ghaor sey sab
ik baar parrh kar phir pharrna, phir deikhtey rehna ghaor sey tum
har lafz utthey ga kaagahz sey aur tum sey lipat kar ro dey ga
har harf chorr ke satroN ko baahoN meiN tumhaari simtey ga
tum merey khat ke lafzoN sey jab pyaar karo ge thorri deir
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
un uljhey uljhey harfoN ko jab dil sey parrhna chaaho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
us geeley geeley kaaghaz ko jab aaNkhoN sey choo kar dekho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
tab baat samajh meiN aaey gi ke is khat ko kis ney bhigoya hey
saawan ki bholi baarish ney ya meri paagal aaNkhoN ney
wo aaNkheiN rasta taktey jo khud saawan saawan ho gaei heiN
ye khat unhoN ney bhigoya hey!!!

By: Amal

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achhi nazm hai amal sahab.
daad kubul kijiye....

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Re: Aek khat bheega sa

:teary3:

nazm buhat khobsorat he …
btw aaj itneyyy dinoon baad main aayi hoon our aagey aap ki nazm :slight_smile:

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bahut hi khoobsuraat nazam hai amal bhai thanks for sharing!

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Bohat hi achi hai.. Thanx 4 sharing :k:

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:k:

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Very Nice, Thanks for sharing :frowning:

http://www.jordysworld.de/emoticons/trau03.gif

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Thanx a lot guys...pasandeedgi ke leeye shukriya:)

Gul aap kiuN ro rahi heiN?
It wasn't meant to make anybody cry:(

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wow.... really nice!!.... bohot achi hai.....

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boaht khoob…loved reading it…i was just thinking about you not posting something and here u go…:slight_smile:

thanx alot for sharing…:flower1:

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zabardast

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Re: Aek khat bheega sa

very nice :k:

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superb, really lovely:k: :k:

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SubhanAllah :)

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
*Aek khat bheega sa**

YuN to tumhey har mosam meiN hum likhtey rahey heiN laakhoN khat
is baar magar saawan rut meiN jo khat hum tum ko likheiN ge
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna tum
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna ke usey tum sey bohat kuch kehna hey
har lafz kahey ga tum sey kuch, tum suntey rehna ghaor sey sab
ik baar parrh kar phir pharrna, phir deikhtey rehna ghaor sey tum
har lafz utthey ga kaagahz sey aur tum sey lipat kar ro dey ga
har harf chorr ke satroN ko baahoN meiN tumhaari simtey ga
tum merey khat ke lafzoN sey jab pyaar karo ge thorri deir
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
un uljhey uljhey harfoN ko jab dil sey parrhna chaaho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
us geeley geeley kaaghaz ko jab aaNkhoN sey choo kar dekho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
tab baat samajh meiN aaey gi ke is khat ko kis ney bhigoya hey
saawan ki bholi baarish ney ya meri paagal aaNkhoN ney
wo aaNkheiN rasta taktey jo khud saawan saawan ho gaei heiN
ye khat unhoN ney bhigoya hey!!!

By: Amal
[/QUOTE]


Very Nice Amal!

ubhi kul hee i was reading a ghazal

Jin ka her lafz mujhe yaad tha fani ki terha
Yaad thay mujh ko jo paygham-e-zubani ki terha
Mujh ko pyare thay jo anmol nishani kee terha
Tere khushboo mein baase khut main jalata kaise

:)

by the way.... yeh ansoo bahut precious chees hootay hain ;)

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boht achei :k:

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thanx a lot for your “thinking” and liking the nazm :slight_smile:

Also many thanx to **Masoom Muskaan, Amjad Bhai, nia_khan, ShaRaRa, CC, Diy@, HeArT HaCKeR, Khushee, *** Vivacious *, Lamhay, Rameesha ji and Pramod:flower1::slight_smile:

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Amal aap nai buhat achee poem likhee .... aisee hi aur likh ker hum se share kertai rehain :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

Gul aap kiuN ro rahi heiN?
It wasn't meant to make anybody cry:(
[/QUOTE]

YuuN hii bhaR Aaey Aankh meiN Aansoo.....

:~)

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Re: Aek khat bheega sa

bhut hi zaberdast hamesha ki tarah :k:
amal ji app itnay dair baad kiun post kartay ho :frowning:
sab ko itna intezar hota ha :slight_smile: :flower1: