Aek khat bheega sa

[NikamiJano]

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

*Originally posted by Amal: *
Aek khat bheega sa

YuN to tumhey har mosam meiN hum likhtey rahey heiN laakhoN khat
is baar magar saawan rut meiN jo khat hum tum ko likheiN ge
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna tum
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna ke usey tum sey bohat kuch kehna hey
har lafz kahey ga tum sey kuch, tum suntey rehna ghaor sey sab
ik baar parrh kar phir pharrna, phir deikhtey rehna ghaor sey tum
har lafz utthey ga kaagahz sey aur tum sey lipat kar ro dey ga
har harf chorr ke satroN ko baahoN meiN tumhaari simtey ga
tum merey khat ke lafzoN sey jab pyaar karo ge thorri deir
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
un uljhey uljhey harfoN ko jab dil sey parrhna chaaho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
us geeley geeley kaaghaz ko jab aaNkhoN sey choo kar dekho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
tab baat samajh meiN aaey gi ke is khat ko kis ney bhigoya hey
saawan ki bholi baarish ney ya meri paagal aaNkhoN ney
wo aaNkheiN rasta taktey jo khud saawan saawan ho gaei heiN
ye khat unhoN ney bhigoya hey!!!

zabardast :k: like always…ahhhh sorryyyy me itni late ho gayee
wish k nikami ko urdu aati hoti ap ki tareaf kaRnay k leay..u know…

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

*Originally posted by Amal: *
Aek khat bheega sa

YuN to tumhey har mosam meiN hum likhtey rahey heiN laakhoN khat
is baar magar saawan rut meiN jo khat hum tum ko likheiN ge
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna tum
us khat ko ghaor sey parrhna ke usey tum sey bohat kuch kehna hey
har lafz kahey ga tum sey kuch, tum suntey rehna ghaor sey sab
ik baar parrh kar phir pharrna, phir deikhtey rehna ghaor sey tum
har lafz utthey ga kaagahz sey aur tum sey lipat kar ro dey ga
har harf chorr ke satroN ko baahoN meiN tumhaari simtey ga
tum merey khat ke lafzoN sey jab pyaar karo ge thorri deir
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
un uljhey uljhey harfoN ko jab dil sey parrhna chaaho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
us geeley geeley kaaghaz ko jab aaNkhoN sey choo kar dekho ge
tab baat samajh meiN aey gi
tab baat samajh meiN aaey gi ke is khat ko kis ney bhigoya hey
saawan ki bholi baarish ney ya meri paagal aaNkhoN ney
wo aaNkheiN rasta taktey jo khud saawan saawan ho gaei heiN
ye khat unhoN ney bhigoya hey!!!

By: Amal

very very beautiful:teary3:

[Aceones]

bohot pyari nazam :)

[arifnawaz1]

Zabardat !

[Amal]

Re: Re: Aek khat bheega sa

*Originally posted by nikii: *
amal ji app itnay dair baad kiun post kartay ho…sab ko itna intezar hota ha

nikii nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat
bohat shukriya:flower1:…rahi baat dair baad post
karney ki…to wo kehtey heiN na ke “qadar kho
deta hey roz ka aana jaana” … actually I do
not want anybody to get fed up with me:)

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

…ahhhh sorryyyy me itni late ho gayee

deir aaey, durust aaey pasandeedgi aur
tashreef-aawri ke leeye shukriya:)

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Also many thanx to **arifnawaz, Aceones!, **and Guest7777

[Lamhay]

Re: Re: Re: Aek khat bheega sa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

nikii nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat
bohat shukriya:flower1:…rahi baat dair baad post
karney ki…to wo kehtey heiN na ke “qadar kho
deta hey roz ka aana jaana” … actually I do
not want anybody to get fed up with me:)

deir aaey, durust aaey pasandeedgi aur
tashreef-aawri ke leeye shukriya:)

well Amal ur rite but aap agar apni qadar khodenay ki baat karahay hain tu ur the best poet
aap ki poems aap ki khudh likhi hui hoti hai zayeda taar! so i dont think so kay aap kay anay janay sey roz roz k aap apni qadar khodeingey and we r always waiting for ur poetries sopls dont think negative !

[nikii]

Re: Re: Re: Aek khat bheega sa

*Originally posted by Amal: *

nikii nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat
bohat shukriya:flower1:…rahi baat dair baad post
karney ki…to wo kehtey heiN na ke “qadar kho
deta hey roz ka aana jaana” … actually I do
not want anybody to get fed up with me:)

qader kho deta tu hain likan har koi nahi app ka mashAllah unique style ha likhnay ka aur lamhay sis nay sahi kah asara cafe app ki poetry ka betabi say intezar karta ha aur yeh baat tu sochein hi maat na app

[Jaan_Lewaa]

bhut achay:k:

[Gemini_the_Great]

beautiful :)

[ARSH]

bohat KhOOb........

[Sandleen]

Nice poem

[juMurA]

bohat khooB

hamisha ki tarhaN :)

[Koyal]

Bautifullll .......and i logged ma nickk yahoooo

[Aceones]

^ welcome to GS :)