Aek khat bheega sa

Amal · September 18, 2007, 2:25am

Dushwari · September 18, 2007, 2:28am

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

sensitive and kind poetry, Amal.
hanks for sharing.

Dushwari

Prince_Ali · September 18, 2007, 3:23am

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

OMG! i love these lines
woh aankhen jo rasta takte khud sawan, sawan ho gayin hein
is khat ko inhon ne bighoya hai

grand poetry Amal bhai!

AQ · September 18, 2007, 4:12am

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

Amal: are you sure "Baat samajh maiN aaye gee" :)??

Aliyish · September 18, 2007, 4:46am

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

Teray Khushboo mein Basay Khaaat :) Achi hai Bahi !

Shab-e-Hijar · September 18, 2007, 5:46am

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woh ye sub karay gi i dont think so

redidentity · September 18, 2007, 6:30am

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Simply Superb :k:

SJ · September 18, 2007, 12:11pm

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app hamesha he Acha likhtay ho ....................aur iss baar bhe bohat khob likha hai:)

Dilsay · September 18, 2007, 9:54pm

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Bohat achay... Khush rahain....

Shumaisa · September 19, 2007, 12:32am

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V. Nicee..

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 19, 2007, 7:43pm

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nice 1 bhae :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 20, 2007, 9:57am

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Aap new Ghazal ya Nazm kab Post kareiN ge

aapka Khat kitni baar hum sab parh chukey heiN

P_G · September 20, 2007, 2:48pm

Re: Aek khat bheega sa

baray mushkil khat likhtay hain app UN ko ..yeh theek bat nahi ...: P

nazam main hasasiyat had say sawa hay ...nice one :-)