Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

Amal · January 29, 2011, 2:57pm

Ae****k chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey
merey sath sath safar meiN tha meri manziloN sey zara parey
teri justuju ke hisaar sey terey khuwab terey khayal sey
maiN wo shakhs tha jo kharra raha teri chahatoN sey zara parey
kabhi dil ki baat kahi na thi jo kahi to wo bhi dabi dabi
merey lafz poorey to they magar teri samaa’aton sey zara parey
tu chala gaya merey hamsafar zara dekh mur ke to ik nazar
meri kashtiyaaN heiN jali huieN terey saahiloN sey zara parey!

blueangel · January 29, 2011, 2:58pm

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

amazing!! :k:

fara · January 29, 2011, 5:21pm

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

Uff... ghazab ki jadugari hay lafzoon main... seharangeez ghazal hay Amal... thanks for sharing.

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 29, 2011, 5:24pm

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

beautiful sharing bhai

Sheal · January 29, 2011, 7:02pm

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

awesome sharing :k:

i guess some one shared it before.

Amarbail · January 29, 2011, 8:58pm

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Too good … :k:

Aryaan · January 30, 2011, 3:03am

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Good One Amal..:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 30, 2011, 6:14am

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Boht khoob :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 30, 2011, 6:15am

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

par i have written the first line as "aik chaand tanha khara raha mere asmaaN se zarra parray" ... dunno which 0ne is correct

Shab-e-Hijar · January 30, 2011, 6:49am

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one of my fav.. thanks for sharing amal :)

Amal · January 30, 2011, 2:39pm

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

Thanx blueangel…

fara ji bohat shukriay

You liked it bachchey?

Thanx Sheal

Thanx Arif

Shukriya Aryaan

Ho sakta hey…in fact kharra hi hona chahiye…I agree with you…

Thanx Shab

Shazia_Arif · January 30, 2011, 2:49pm

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don't have words to praise you...such a v nice poem.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 30, 2011, 4:24pm

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buhat khoob Amal, thanks for sharing :-)

Amal · January 30, 2011, 4:34pm

Re: Aek chand tanha khila raha meray aasmaN se zara parey

Thanx Shazia.

You are most welcome :)