Acha tha

[IS]

Re: Acha tha

@deedawar

Skriya Janaab.

Aur Kahtey Rahiye.

Always Welcome
koshish karoom ga

[Azad]

Re: Acha tha

ban gaYa hay ik khawab sa jo zindgee ka
wo shakhs rehta ik khayal he to acha tha

bohut khoob

[IS]

Re: Acha tha

^ Sukriya Azad Bahi

[sodaii]

Re: Acha tha

@Innocent_Smile

Walikam salam jitay rahein khush rahein
pasan karnay ka sukriya
mujay aap ke baat bilkul b buri nahi lagi balkay khushi hoiee hay k aap nay itnay goor say parha
mai b check karoon ga and agar aap ko zaihan mai koi wazan wala shair ho to plz aap b zaroor share ke giay ga

Assalamoalaikum Innocent smile,

khush rahiye, aaj kal ka dour aesa hay na kay dar lagta hai , na janay kab, kahan , kon khafa ho jay .. khair aap kay hi shair main lafzon ki tarteeb zara si badal kar aik koshish ki hay , shayad aap kay mayaar k mutabiq ho

bana raha umer bhar jo maseeha gheroN ka
kabhi humari bhi khabar laita; tou acha tha

umeed hay aap isay bagore dekhain gay.

shukrya

Sodaii