Acha tha

IS · July 25, 2005, 7:09am

Special Thanks to AQ bahi

**yea jo lahoo sa meri ankhooN say aaj tapakta hay **
**kash wo ik ansoon he rehta tau acha tha **

**yea jo meray seenay maiN ik dil sa dahrhakata hay **
**us ke jaga ik pathar he rakha hota to acha tha **

yea jo aaj lagta hay yoon apna apna sa
**wo ik ajnabi sa he rehta to acha tha **

kab tak katay gee zindgee meri tanha tanha youN hee akhir
hamsafar koi kabhi hamien bhee milaa hotaa to acha tha

**khul gaYa raaz meri surkh ankhooN ka aaj **
**din aaj ka na charha hotaa kabhi to acha tha **

**bana raha umer bhar jo maseeha gheroN ka **
**laita kabhi khabar hamari bhee to acha tha **

**ban gaYa hay ik khawab sa jo zindgee ka **
**wo shakhs rehta ik khayal he to acha tha **

**akhir bhool gaya na IMRAN ab ghar ka rasta **
yonhi baysababb na phira karta to acha tha

AQ · July 25, 2005, 12:15pm

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As I told you, beautiful poem :k:

IS · July 25, 2005, 10:32pm

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^ Thanks AQ bahi

Golden_Scorpion_1 · July 26, 2005, 4:04am

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Mashallah.. Very Nice.. Imran…

IS · July 26, 2005, 9:14am

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^ Thanks GS bahi

hafsa_dudette · July 26, 2005, 6:29pm

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Wow… MashaAllah… kia baat hai

and of couse… ek anda bhi

IS · July 27, 2005, 12:30pm

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Thanks Hafi Sis
nahi mai nay anda nahi laina ab
Anday back to Hafi sis

hafsa_dudette · July 28, 2005, 9:04am

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kia kharab hai inn andon main?

IS · July 28, 2005, 10:41pm

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kia yea kam hay k yea anday hain

Jaan_Lewaa · July 29, 2005, 2:09am

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zabardust:k:
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thanx 4 sharin

hafsa_dudette · July 29, 2005, 10:06am

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anday

cutesponge · July 29, 2005, 9:18pm

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Innocent_Smile:

Special Thanks to AQ bahi

**yea jo lahoo sa meri ankhooN say aaj tapakta hay **
**kash wo ik ansoon he rehta tau acha tha **

**yea jo meray seenay maiN ik dil sa dahrhakata hay **
**us ke jaga ik pathar he rakha hota to acha tha **

yea jo aaj lagta hay yoon apna apna sa
**wo ik ajnabi sa he rehta to acha tha **

kab tak katay gee zindgee meri tanha tanha youN hee akhir
hamsafar koi kabhi hamien bhee milaa hotaa to acha tha

**khul gaYa raaz meri surkh ankhooN ka aaj **
**din aaj ka na charha hotaa kabhi to acha tha **

**bana raha umer bhar jo maseeha gheroN ka **
**laita kabhi khabar hamari bhee to acha tha **

**ban gaYa hay ik khawab sa jo zindgee ka **
**wo shakhs rehta ik khayal he to acha tha **

**akhir bhool gaya na IMRAN ab ghar ka rasta **
yonhi baysababb na phira karta to acha tha

wow bohot kub IS bhai bohto achay aur specially yeh shair bohot achay lagay hain mujhey
ban gaya hay ik khawab sa jo zindagee ka
wh shaks rehta ik khayal he to acha tha
akhir bhool gaya na IMRAN ab ghar ka rasta
yonhi baysabab na phira karta to acha tha
bohot zabardast
aap kay zehan may itnay acha ashaar kaisay atay hain AQ BHAI AUR IS BHAI?

umer.ashraf · July 29, 2005, 10:21pm

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Very nice but a bit sad..

Ghum to aap ne sare biyan kur diye apne
Khushi ke pal ka tazkira bi hota to acha tha

cutesponge · July 30, 2005, 12:00pm

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is this shair by u umer ashraf?

IS · August 1, 2005, 12:14pm

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Thanks and Welcome

IS · August 1, 2005, 12:15pm

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kha lain khud he

IS · August 1, 2005, 12:15pm

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Thanks Moto
bas kabi kabi a he jatay hain

IS · August 1, 2005, 12:17pm

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Thanks and khair itni b sad nahi hay

hmmmmmmmmm very nice shair

cutesponge · August 1, 2005, 2:04pm

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lekin meray zehan may to kabhi bhi nahi atay na

IS · August 2, 2005, 11:28am

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^ bachoo k zaihan mai nahi ati esi batien