Acha tha

umer.ashraf · August 2, 2005, 4:24pm

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zaihan muntasher ho to shair keh nahin sukta shaayer
warna inteshar keh dia hota kuch to kia acha tha?

bachoon ka zaihan hi hai jo muntasher nahin hota
shaayer bachey hi rehtey zindagi bhar to ucha tha

shaayer-->poet

cutesponge · August 2, 2005, 6:54pm

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hmmmmm lekin may to bachi nahi hoon

Amal · August 3, 2005, 6:35pm

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Very nice indeed Innocent_Smile:k:…bohat achi poem hey…thanx for sharing with us and keep writing

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 7, 2005, 6:18pm

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Boht khoob !

keep writing !

Lovely_Me · August 27, 2005, 4:46pm

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bhuhut achi poem hai. keep it up.:)

Lovely_Me · August 27, 2005, 4:51pm

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zindagi mein sub kuch nahi milta
agar milta tu shahid ya bhi acha tha

tum kaha chal diya mujhay choor kar
aik baar moor kar dhekha hota tu ya bhi acha tha

IS · August 29, 2005, 10:32am

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acha waqai

IS · August 29, 2005, 10:33am

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Thanks Amal Bahi

IS · August 29, 2005, 10:34am

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Thanks Hetru

IS · August 29, 2005, 10:34am

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Sukriya Sis

Lovely_Me · August 30, 2005, 3:22pm

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ur always welcome

IS · August 31, 2005, 2:20pm

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:)

Lovely_Me · August 31, 2005, 2:53pm

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flower:

IS · August 31, 2005, 2:56pm

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Lovely_Me · August 31, 2005, 4:34pm

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:k:

DiYa · August 31, 2005, 6:37pm

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zabardast

IS · September 2, 2005, 6:36am

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^ thanks and congratulation on ur 2k Posts :)

Lovely_Me · September 2, 2005, 1:06pm

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ur most welcome:)

IS · September 3, 2005, 4:57am

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^ mai nay app ko to nahi kaha tha thanks is dafa

nakhan · September 14, 2005, 4:08pm

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really very nice one