abhi toofaa'N nahi thehRa abhi aa'nkhooN maiN jal-thal hai

NikamiJano · June 28, 2007, 4:07pm

abhi jugnoo nahi rootheY abhi aansoo nahi tootey abhi suraj nahi jagaa abhi taa'Ray nahi doobay abhi mehtaab baaqi hai ***abhi ik khawab baaqi hai***

abhi manzil nahi aa’ee
abhi rastaa nahi thehRa
abhi jungal nahi guzRa
abhi daR’yaa nahi utRaa
abhi gaRdaab baqi hai
abhi aik khawab baqi hai

abhi toofaa’N nahi thehRa
abhi aankhooN maiN jal-thal hai
abhi seenay maiN halchal hai
abhi khiRki maiN baaRish hai
abhi kamRay maiN badal hai
abhi baRfaab baqi hai
abhi aik khawab baqi hai

abhi qisa adhooRa hai
abhi puRi kahani hai
abhi jheelooN maiN paNi hai
abhi rastey maiN daldal hai
abhi paayaab baqi hai
abhi aik khawab baqi hai

redidentity · June 28, 2007, 4:09pm

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Beautiful..

SJ · June 28, 2007, 5:00pm

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very nice :k:

Amal · June 28, 2007, 5:20pm

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Couldn’t separate something for quote. Whole nazm is a masterpiece. Great stuff :k: Thanx NikamiJi for sharing it with us. By the way, jahaaN tak mujhey yaad parrta hey aap to “nazm person” heiN hi nahi :~)

babri · June 28, 2007, 6:50pm

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great. .k:

Koyal · June 28, 2007, 10:52pm

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lagta hia Nikamiji pe b ap ka rang charh raha rafta rafta

nice one nikami ji

NikamiJano · June 30, 2007, 4:01am

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NikamiJano · June 30, 2007, 4:01am

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Shab-e-Hijar · June 30, 2007, 5:24am

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wah jano gi kya baat hai very nice poem:k:

deep_ocean · June 30, 2007, 6:44am

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I selected this poem for next posting

very beautiful

thanks for sharing

Jhanjharewali · June 30, 2007, 3:21pm

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Jano aap toh chhaa gayeen......phir se! very beautiful

High-Tech · June 30, 2007, 4:09pm

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nice :k:

WiseGuy · July 1, 2007, 11:17am

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Waj Jano jee, thank you for sharing :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 1, 2007, 7:40pm

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beautiful :) kese ho ap online kab ate:(

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:21pm

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:)

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:22pm

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me hoti hia online jab ap nahi hoti :p...mazak a part ap Pm kar dya karo na ap online tu me a jaiey ghi me aj kla kam kam online :)

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:23pm

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shukria g :)...chalo is bahanay ap se baat karnay ko tu mil jati :)

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:23pm

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kia baat hia Jano ki :p

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:24pm

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thanks for selecting my poem

NikamiJano · July 1, 2007, 10:24pm

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