aafat kii shoKhiyaa.N hai.n tumhaarii nigaah me.n

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Ali_2 October 30, 2007, 9:46am 1

aafat kii shoKhiyaa.N hai.n tumhaarii nigaah me.n
mehashar ke fitane khelate hai.n jalwa-gaah me.n

wo dushmanii se dekhate hai.n dekhate to hai.n
mai.n shaad huu.N ke huu.N to kisii kii nigaah me.n

aatii hai baat baat mujhe yaad baar baar
kehta huu.N daurr daurr ke qaasid se raah me.n

is tauba par hai naaz mujhe zaahid is qadar
jo Toot kar shariik huu.N haal-e-tabaah me.n

mushtaaq is adaa ke bahot dard-ma.nd the
ae DaaGh tum to baiTh gaye ek aah me.n

being_lonely October 30, 2007, 9:56am 2

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umdaa sharing :k:

SJ October 30, 2007, 10:04am 3

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Hmmm…
Very nice Ghazal…
Bohat achee hai Bhai:k:

Ali_2 October 30, 2007, 10:36am 4

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thanks

bholibisri October 30, 2007, 1:56pm 5

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suchi se

Ali_2 October 30, 2007, 4:44pm 6

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Muchi

NikamiJano October 30, 2007, 8:40pm 7

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^:cb:

ps : nice sahring Ali

Ali_2 October 31, 2007, 7:58am 8

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thanks Mod sahiba

arsalanh2000 October 31, 2007, 10:05am 9

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buhut khoob, Nice sharing Ali

Shab-e-Hijar October 31, 2007, 4:40pm 10

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reminds me of song …
ankho mai teri ajab si ajab si …

Ali_2 October 31, 2007, 4:51pm 11

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thanks

This frustrating long wait.....

redidentity November 1, 2007, 4:40am 12

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Kis ki nigahon ki baat ho rahee hai :)

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