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*Originally posted by Resurrected: *
Folks, unthinking praise is cheap and worthless. Praise sparingly so it's worth something. I read this piece of work, which is supposedly poetry. It is trite where it is not bay-tuka.
For example: aankhoN say khwaab nonchnay ka kya baytuka isti'aara hai bhai? Aur ye rooh, jism aur woh teesri cheez ki zanjeer...is meiN kya baat hui?
na zabaan ki lataafat hai, na khayaal ki gehraai hai. FilmoN meiN bhi nahiN chalay ga kyooNke behr vaghairah ki bandish say aazaad hai.
I'd have quitely ignored this sub-standard piece of work. But two pages of unthinking praise is what makes my blood boil.
-R
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I dont agree with you Resurrected. Perhaps this is the worst thing you can do to some one here. His work is praise worthy and the praise he got was due to him. It is advised for your good to engage in a meaningful and constructive criticism.
Right Mr. Resurrected I am impressed by your sense of understanding Poetry. You surely have a flair of finer criticism but I think you wasted your talent by commenting on this worthless piece of tuk-bandi Though I have a heart that hears with patience and I honour your views, yet I am driven to say that no one is compelled to praise as he is to criticise. Since you are welcome so are others and I thank YOU just as others for your valuable comments:)
By the way aankhon se khwab nochna aisa hee hai jaise “Faiz ka beemar” jisse be-waja qarar mil jata hai MAGAR us beemar kee yeh to baad walee kaifiat hai, pehlay uskee aankhon se khwab chin jaate hain
Dil, rooh aur jism kee zanjeer ko mein samjhane se is liye qasir hoon kioonke yeh buhat hee simple see phenomena hai!
Please dont feel offended on my reply to your comments. I think I have the right to defend myself and my work.
You are entitled to constructive criticism, and your own opinion, but walking all over someone's well put together effort in my opinion is not nice fellas like yourself should do. I think if you had given your criticism in a more milder tone it would have been much appreciated.
Each day on this forum we get many posts with the works of many refined and well-known poets, those that have published their works and are praised by many, but it's not so often that you see someone courageous enough as Perfectionist to put up their work. We welcome personal collections, it gives us all a chance to improve our work and obtain an audience. This poem may not be of much worth to you but it's take emotions and coherent thoughts of someone to compose this. Credit should be given where it's due.
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*Originally posted by ~Sehar~: *
Resurrected
You are entitled to constructive criticism, and your own opinion, but walking all over someone's well put together effort in my opinion is not nice fellas like yourself should do. I think if you had given your criticism in a more milder tone it would have been much appreciated.
Each day on this forum we get many posts with the works of many refined and well-known poets, those that have published their works and are praised by many, but it's not so often that you see someone courageous enough as Perfectionist to put up their work. We welcome personal collections, it gives us all a chance to improve our work and obtain an audience. This poem may not be of much worth to you but it's take emotions and coherent thoughts of someone to compose this. Credit should be given where it's due.
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Thanks Sehar. I am honoured, more so when a moderator likes my work. :)
