*aa mein tujhe dikahoon* Meree ek nazm!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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!I just thought to share one of my poems with you!

aa mein tujhe dikhaoon
ke dil ke makaan se
ik makeen ko nikaal kar
doosra basana parey
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke aankhon se
man chahe khuwabon ko
nauchna parey
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke kisee ke liye likhe geeton ko
kisee aur ke liye
gungunana parey
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke supardgee ke woh be awaz lamhe
ruswaiyon ke daagh saja kar
thehr jaein
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke dil kee lakeerein
haathon kee lakeeron se
ulajhne lagein
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke dil, rooh aur jism
kee tootee huee zanjeer
ko jorna parey
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
kia hota hai

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Re: aa mein tujhe dikahoon Meree ek nazm!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Perfectionist: *
aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke supardgee ke woh be awaz lamhe
ruswaiyon ke daagh saja kar
thehr jaein
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke dil, rooh aur jism
kee tootee huee zanjeer
ko jorna parey
to kia hota hai

[/QUOTE]

Perfectionist Thanks for sharing such a Beautiful Poetry:)

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Re: aa mein tujhe dikahoon Meree ek nazm!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Perfectionist: *
!I just thought to share one of my poems with you!

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke dil, rooh aur jism
kee tootee huee zanjeer
ko jorna parey
to kia hota hai

aa mein tujhe bataoon
kia hota hai
[/QUOTE]

sigh:(

buhat achhi kawish he Perfectionist jee...

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:(

beautifully expressed poetry !!

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Re: aa mein tujhe dikahoon Meree ek nazm!

aa mein tujhe bataoon
ke dil kee lakeerein
haathon kee lakeeron se
ulajhne lagein
to kia hota hai

touching ....

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nice effort:)..

7

nice n very touchy :)

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Thank you Gul-e-Tasbeeh, Rameesha, Kashish, Saby, Truth is beauty and nikii..Thank you so much for your admiration :)

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Very nice perfectionist ji :)

10

wah bahut khoob Perfectionist ji!

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Thank you Sehar and Lamhay. Thank you so much!

12

Hmm bohot khoob:k:

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Perfect…loved it yaar…Its beautiful, very well worded and painfully romantic…:k:

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bahut khoob! very well done shayiri! :k: :k: :k:

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Nice:k:

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It’s sweeet. :k:

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aaw thats sooo lovely:k: aap to pooray pooray shayar ho:k:

18

wow..beautiful!!
waise...why is it important?? like in the topic place...

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thanx Nayab! :slight_smile:

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capricorn, thanx so much for your support :slight_smile: