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vo ko_ii aur na thaa chand Khushk patte the
shajar se TuuT ke jo fasl-e-gul pe roye the
abhii abhii tumhe.n sochaa to kuchh na yaad aayaa
abhii abhii to ham ek-duusare se bichha.De the
tumhaare baad chaman par jab ik nazar Daalii
kalii kalii me.n Khizaa.N ke chiraaG jalate the
tamaam umr vafaa ke gunaah_gaar rahe
ye aur baat ki ham aadamii to achchhe the
shab-e-Khaamosh ko tanhaa_ii ne zabaa.N de dii
pahaa.D guu.Njate the dasht san_sanaate the
vo ek baar mare jin ko thaa hayaat se pyaar
jo zindagii se gurezaa.N the roz marate the
naye Khayaal ab aate hai.n Dhal ke zahan me.n
hamaare dil me.n kabhii khet lah_lahaate the
ye iratiqaa kaa chalan hai ki har zamaane me.n
puraane log naye aadamii se Darate the
‘Nadeem’ jo bhii mulaaqaat thii adhuurii thii
ki ek chehare ke piichhe hazaar chehare the
ASA
September 9, 2003, 10:37am
2
very nice… :k:
tamaam umr vafaa ke gunaah_gaar rahe
ye aur baat ki ham aadamii to achchhe the
Amal
September 9, 2003, 12:48pm
3
Re: zindgi tujay keya naam doon!
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *
abhii abhii tumhe.n sochaa to kuchh na yaad aayaa
abhii abhii to ham ek-duusare se bichha.De the
tamaam umr vafaa ke gunaah_gaar rahe
ye aur baat ki ham aadamii to achchhe the
vo ek baar mare jin ko thaa hayaat se pyaar
jo zindagii se gurezaa.N the roz marate the
ye iratiqaa kaa chalan hai ki har zamaane me.n
puraane log naye aadamii se Darate the
‘Nadeem’ jo bhii mulaaqaat thii adhuurii thii
ki ek chehare ke piichhe hazaar chehare the
Lovely ghazal Amjad Bhai :k:…nice to see you after a long time. Aatey jaatey raha kareiN…
kia baat hai:k::k::k:
thanx!
Beautiful gazal and img..lagta hia ap aj kla inhi kamon main bz jo idher udher dekhnay ki fursat nahi
Diva
September 11, 2003, 2:59pm
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Acchi hai buhat ..keep it up
Thanx every body ! :)
Amal, I am always around! ;)
NikamiJano , u know i dont see idher udher , her chees ka time hoota hay na, idher udher daykhnay ka time hi nahi :D
Lamhay
September 12, 2003, 6:14pm
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Bahut hi zabardust E.T thanks 4 sharing!