Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
Anu bahi 
jaysa app khud he kahtay hain . Shairi tukk.bandi kaa naaam nahe hai . Mein be yeahee samjtah hoon kay Yea Misra’oon kay meelaap ka naam hai . yea shair is Ghazal ki family ka sab say alaag or muqtalif bacha hai ! Jo mun.farid be hai or rythm or Qafia mein dosroon say mila howa bii !
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
Shukriya Hazraat . Wooh seeraat wala shair . Apnay app mein ek noha hai . Aj kaal log kuch zaida hee suuraat pasand ho chalay hain ! Ushi pay Tawaju or ushi ko banaya sanwaraa jata hai !
woh kehtay hain na kay,
chehray ki dewani dunya, man kay andar jhankay kia
jo ankh kisi main jhank sakay, waoh ankh kisi kay paas naheen.
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
*Ankh karta hoN band .mein jab'be
tuh muja'jism khayal hotee hai
*
bohat umda!
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
Anu bahi :) jaysa app khud he kahtay hain . Shairi tukk.bandi kaa naaam nahe hai . Mein be yeahee samjtah hoon kay Yea Misra'oon kay meelaap ka naam hai . yea shair is Ghazal ki family ka sab say alaag or muqtalif bacha hai ! Jo mun.farid be hai or rythm or Qafia mein dosroon say mila howa bii !
would you mind if I make it:
meree udasiyon mein bahar kay Rang
zindagii kyon baY Jamal hotee hai ?
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
woh kehtay hain na kay,
chehray ki dewani dunya, man kay andar jhankay kia jo ankh kisi main jhank sakay, waoh ankh kisi kay paas naheen.
Woh ankh ho tu banda Sha.hibay Kamaal na ho'jaay !
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
would you mind if I make it:
meree udasiyon mein bahar kay Rang * *zindagii kyon baY Jamal hotee hai ?
Kardian bahi :) apna kia ja'tah hai , Hum konsii Book publish karnay lagay hain !
Ab jiskay Dil mein ahay woh paa.aay Roshni
Hum nay tu dil Jala Kay . Saray Aam rak dia
waysay acha khyal hai agar yun karlain tu
meree udasiyon mein bahar kay Rang *
*Kyon zindagii. baY Jamal hotee hai ?
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
Bohat Khoob :k:
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
Nice one thanks for sharing:-)
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
*Ankh karta hoN band .mein jab'be * *tuh muja'jism khayal hotee hai *
bohat umda!
Kia kar.Ain Usstaani jee !
Zingahe kay Her Khail mein , is Dil ko maat hoti rahii
may tha kay Haashta raha . or Shairi Rootiii rahii
(Aliyish)
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
tow na khailan karain itnay khail
waisay this one is good too. Heard that Ajnabi Shehar kay Ajnabi rastay, I can feeltraces of that ghazal in the last shair of yours.
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
tow na khailan karain itnay khail
.
Jis ko Bi CHaha Ushay Shiddaat say chahaaa hai Faaraz
Silsilaa tootaa nahii hai . Dard ki Zanjeer ka
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
waisay this one is good too. Heard that Ajnabi Shehar kay Ajnabi rastay, I can feeltraces of that ghazal in the last shair of yours.
Han kuch aysa he hai , Jaysa us Ghazal ka ek shair tah
Zakham jabhi kohi zehno O dil pay laga . zindagi ki taraf ek dareecha khula
kitni yaadon kay bhatkay howay Karwaan , Dil kay zakhmoon kay daar kathkatatay rahay !
Re: Zindagii Jab waabal !
Good Ol'days !