Bari hi Bholi Bhali si
Bari Masoom dikhti thee
kabhi chanchal
kabhi bojhal
kabhi wo muskurati thi
subha mai geet gati thee
shaam mai gard urati thee
kisi nay poocha tha yeh sab
aur dil tha mera chillaya
…han wo zindagi THEE meri
wohi tou zindagi thee meri
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beautiful and close to reality
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thanks.......
fazeelat..i really love your poetry...
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welcome
mujh se mil lo ya mera likha hua perh lo
dono'n aik se hein, mein bhe meri tehreer bhe
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JALIL aasaa'n nahee'n aabad karna ghar muhabbat ka
Yeh un ka kaam hay jo ZINDAGI barbaad kartay hain ....
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^kiya hovaa ???
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mohabbat itni zalim hey....mujhy nahi pata tha
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^jee haan yeh itni hee zalim hay jitna mainnay bataya hay is shair k zaryay
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Beautiful… Buhut Khoob :k:
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ya app ki zindagi the? wasy it,s good
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nice one Barbie
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weellll guys meri himmat nahi ho rahi thi isay Shorae Gupshup mai likhnay ki.....ke tum sab mera mazak urao gay......but thas my poem.....something from the core of my heart......
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^^ Hmmmm phir to aur bhi achi hay
Ye kis ki baat thi???
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kya baat?
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Beautiful. You are pleasantly unpredictable :)