:: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Prince_Ali July 8, 2007, 6:25am 1

**Koi umeed zindagi se ab nahi rahi
Koi khushi humein nazar ab nahi aati

Maut toh tay hai aani hai ek roz
Par raaton ko neend ab nahi aati

Choti choti baton main dhund lete the khushi
Aaj kisi bhi baat par hansi nahi aati

Zindagi humein ek aise modh pe hai lai aayi
Khud ki khabar ab khud tak nahi aati

Marte hai har pal jee kar aaj hum
Maut hai ki bulane par bhi nahi aati**

deadsoul July 8, 2007, 8:51am 2

Re: :: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

Choti choti baton main dhund lete the khushi
Aaj kisi bhi baat par hansi nahi aati

nice

babri July 8, 2007, 10:36am 3

Re: :: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

***Choti choti baton main dhund lete the khushi
Aaj kisi bhi baat par hansi nahi aati

Very nice.

tahreem_saeed July 8, 2007, 10:47am 4

Re: :: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

beautiful thanks 4 sharing

The Random Thread

Amal July 9, 2007, 1:18pm 5

Re: :: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

Something looks different. Kya ye Bahadur Shah Zafar ki ghazal hey? (Koi ummeed bar nahi aati? )

[QUOTE]
pehely aati thi baat baat pe hansi
ab kisi baat par nahi aati
[/QUOTE]

Sing a Song according 2 Ur Mood !!!!!

Prince_Ali July 9, 2007, 5:00pm 6

Re: :: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

thanx everyone!
jee Amal bhai! it is. :)

inzi_rocks July 9, 2007, 5:05pm 7

Re: :: Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahi ::

Very nice :k:

Shab-e-Hijar July 9, 2007, 5:07pm 8

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sigh!