Dushwari jee aap kee ijazat say aap kay jawab main…
Ya zindagi hai kiya
Pahlay ya to samjahoo
Ya dharkan kisay kahtay hain
Ya tu bata laoo
Sans ka chalna hai kiya
Umer ka guzarna hai kiya
Ahsas ka hona hai kiya
Baat ka ghaoo hai kiya
Tara badalna hai kiya
Mara bekharna hai kiya
Jism ka mitna hai kiya
Rooh ka rahna hai kiya
Sans kay chalnay say
Dill kay dharaknay tak
Gar ya hai zindagi
Tu phir yoonn kahoo na
Ka **Dilsay **lartay hain
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Eid Mubarak dilsay
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:k:
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Thanks and Eid Mubarak
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aap ko bhi EID MUBARAK..
Re: Zindagi say lartay hain....
Aap ko behi eid mubarak hoo
khair mubarak! bhai dilsay kabhi bholay chae ka bhi poch liya karain.
Re: Zindagi say lartay hain....
deikho Dilasay bhai, meiree poem ka setya naas na kero.
:>
2 lines were good though,
Ahsas ka hona hai kiya
Baat ka ghaoo hai kiya
since the rest is involuntary, but as humans capable of will power and responsibility of own actions, the two above are specifically necessary.
best,
Dushwari
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Dushwari jee,
I would have easly send you PM no problem but let me clear things for you if someone gets inspired by something he/she has a right to say it and i did not just posted it and have mentioned that it is a reply..
I dont understand why you always have a negative approach to things... and i dont think you can stop anyone from writing.. yes you can comment but in a way the comments does not cross the lines not the way you did this time...
You saying ka mainay aap ke poem ka satiya naash kar diya there you are wrong your comments has done that job...
I hope this clears things from my side.. As much as I have known you through GS i am sure you will not be quite and will again say something it is ok i am ready for that...
deikho Dilasay bhai, meiree poem ka setya naas na kero. :>
2 lines were good though, Ahsas ka hona hai kiya Baat ka ghaoo hai kiya since the rest is involuntary, but as humans capable of will power and responsibility of own actions, the two above are specifically necessary.
best,
Dushwari
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I want to delete one of my comments but i am not able... Just want to say sorry to all of you
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v.nice :k:
Why are u sorry though? U say urself k Khush rahain! Be happy! 