Zindagi main dosti ka safar

Gadha · January 21, 2003, 11:06am

zindagi main dosti ka safar
kitnaa khoobsoorat safar
kitnaa madhur safar
kitnaa naazuk safar?

iss kay raastoun main
koie bhee rah guzar aisee nahin
koie shahraah koie pagdandee aisee nahin
jiss main kachi mitti aur paani kee khushbu nahin
agar khushbu na ho tau samjho
yeh raastay bhee pakkay ho gayee
aisay jaisay dil pathar kay ho gayee

kacchay raastoun kee khoobsoorati apni jagah
laikin yeh bhee ik haqeeqat hay ya keh lo fasaanaa
dukh keh lo yaa gham ka afsaanaa
kacchay raastay nafratoun kay saaye main
ghussay kee parcchaaien main
aksar ho jaatay hain ojhal aankh say

Zindagi main dosti ka safar!

–Gadha

Lamhay · January 21, 2003, 11:24am

wonderful gadha ji kia kehna!

Dilsay · January 21, 2003, 11:58am

Beautiful.... keep it up... and please do share things like this in this forum... thanks

hanie · January 21, 2003, 1:18pm

bohat acha haye Gadha bhai!very nice.. :)

nikii · January 21, 2003, 1:51pm

very nice gadha bhai :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 21, 2003, 2:46pm

:k:boht achei gadhooo bhae:)

Sandleen · January 21, 2003, 3:41pm

Tuj ko bhi sang dil bana day gaa
Waqat sab kuch tumen sikha day ga
Doob jaey gaa jab yaad kaa soraj
thu mera naam tak bulaa day gaa :)

chand_chehra · January 21, 2003, 5:59pm

very nice :k:

Gadha · January 21, 2003, 8:58pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Sandleen: *
Tuj ko bhi sang dil bana day gaa
Waqat sab kuch tumen sikha day ga
Doob jaey gaa jab yaad kaa soraj
thu mera naam tak bulaa day gaa :)
[/QUOTE]
why don't i do it it the present tense instead of future:( atleast, future tau theek guzray gaa:(

Sandleen · January 21, 2003, 10:10pm

Rafaqtaien kabhi zanjir paa nahi hoten
Naa chal sako thu bichar jaoo doston ki tarah

system · January 22, 2003, 8:04pm

nice ..

_Passionate · January 23, 2003, 3:49am

very nice..flower1:…enjoyed reading it..

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 24, 2003, 4:13am

beautiful:k::k:

Gadha · March 24, 2003, 10:38pm

some one just sent me back this in my inbox:flower1:

*sigh

_Passionate · March 24, 2003, 10:48pm

:k::k:

Gadha · March 24, 2003, 10:52pm

dau dau Thengeyyyyyyyy:crying:

sanctified · March 25, 2003, 2:45am

Toot Jaate Hain Sabhi Rishte Magar..
Dil Se Dil Ka Raabta Apni Jagah..
Dil Ko Hai Tujh Se Na Milne Ka Yaqeen.
Tujh Se Milne Ki Dua Apni Jagah
Youn dil ko har ek shaks par wara nahi karte
aankhon main har ek aqs utara nahi karte
honi hai to ek baar hi ho jaye mohabbat
Yeah bhool hai aisi kay dobara nahi karte

Mal1k · March 25, 2003, 5:49am

Ye mere Junoon ka hai moajza
Ke mainay apni zindagi tere naam kardi
Doston nay hamein akeyla chordiya
Tum nay apni duaein mere naam kardi

Philanthrope · March 25, 2003, 7:49am

Re: Zindagi main dosti ka safar

Its so beautiful … I am speech-less…
Keep Writing…
and Thanks a lot for sharing…

Gadha · April 13, 2003, 8:22am

pharamaa: mairii iss naz’m par toronto maiN muqeem aik column navess nay tabsuraah kartay huay kahaa thaa kay kuch adhoori mehsoos hoti hay… and now i realize no matter how much i put words in this naz’m it will always be adhoori… I will have to keep writing for sure:)

Guzishta say pewastaa:

…

kacchay raastay nafratoun kay saaye main
ghussay kee parcchaaien main
aksar ho jaatay hain ojhal aankh say

Zindagi main dosti ka safar!

raastay jo ho jaatay haiN ojhal aankh say
yeh nahiN kay mitt jaatay haiN
inn raastouN kay nishaaN!

InsaaN khud apni Ana kaa hay maaraa
raastouN say churaa kay nazraiN
chall daitaa hay yeh kehtaa

‘kho gaie manzil
chuTT gayaa kaarwaaN!’

Zindagi main dosti ka safar!

manzil bhee wahin
raastay bhee wahin
duniyaa bhee wohi
ussool-e-duniyaa bhee wohi

badal jaatay haiN dil
badal jaatay haiN insaaN!
bahut banaataa hay insaaN
Aql-O-khird kaa taar-O-poo!
iss kaa takhaiiyoul bay panaah bay misaal!

aur phir!

kacchay raastay nafratoun kay saaye main
ghussay kee parcchaaien main
aksar ho jaatay hain ojhal aankh say

Zindagi main dosti ka safar!