Zindagi Ki Tasveerain..

redidentity · June 10, 2007, 4:59pm

Meri Aik Nazm, Jo Mujhe Khud Bhi Buhat Pasand Hai,

Zindagi Ki Tasveerain
Zindagi Ki Tabeerain
Dhundlakon Main Kho-Ee Hain
Dhund-Lakay Bhi Aise Ke
Jin Main Ghhupp Andhera Hai
Aur Iss Andheray Main
Zindagi Ki Tasveerain
Sirf Siaah Dikhtii Hain
Aur Saari Tabeerain
Zindagi Ke Khuabon Ki
Daur Ka Her Ek Insaan
Dhoondta He Rehta Hai

(Ahmer)

Hope Ke Aap Logon Ko Bhi Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Amal · June 10, 2007, 8:05pm

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Nice, thought-provoking piece Ahmer k: Thanx a lot for sharing your work with us. Hope to see more from you

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 10, 2007, 8:09pm

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Nice one Ahmer:-)

redidentity · June 11, 2007, 4:33am

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Thnx for pasandeedgi :$

fara · June 11, 2007, 6:01am

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buhat achay!

rkopra · June 12, 2007, 3:51am

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Life's realities,
life's dreams,
are all lost in the fog.
Even if I find them,
there's darkness around them.
In this darkness the realities
and dreams look pitch-dark.
Every man is after his dreams,
the dreams that run far ahead of him.

-tr. Ravi Kopra
to be posted at www.whitewings.sulekha.com

redidentity · June 12, 2007, 5:04am

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Thnx alot Ravi Kopra for Translation.. :)

rkopra · June 12, 2007, 5:11am

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You are welcome. Does my translation reflect what you said in your Urdu poem? Would you suggest any changes? Ravi Kopra

redidentity · June 12, 2007, 12:38pm

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Ravi, I guess U have done a perfect translation.. But, only think which is slightly different i.e.

Daur Ka Her Ik Insaan Dhoondta He Rehta Hai

means.. dreams are not running far instead they are lost and everyone is trying to seek them..

PS: Over all, U have DONE a great JOB.. Thnx.. :)

redidentity · June 12, 2007, 12:38pm

Re: Zindagi Ki Tasveerain..

Ravi, I guess U have done a perfect translation.. But, only thing which is slightly different is:

Daur Ka Her Ik Insaan Dhoondta He Rehta Hai

means.. dreams are not running far instead they are lost and everyone is trying to seek them..

PS: Over all, U have DONE a great JOB.. Thnx.. :)

SJ · June 21, 2007, 6:25pm

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zaberdast :k:

redidentity · June 26, 2007, 9:55am

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Thank You Sonia_Jee..

tahreem_saeed · July 6, 2007, 11:23am

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humm bohat khoob kafi acha lekhtey ho ahmer keep it up

redidentity · July 6, 2007, 11:27am

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Thank You Tehreem :)

bheegiyaad · July 6, 2007, 11:35am

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wah wah wah wah wah wah
very nice:)

redidentity · July 6, 2007, 11:41am

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Thank You bheegiyaad :)

Celeron · April 10, 2012, 7:53am

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wah

Sannan · April 10, 2012, 7:59am

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5 saal say purani poetry ko nikalnay key koi khas wajah aap dobara post kar daitay iss ko janab hamain thori pata lag jata

Celeron · April 11, 2012, 4:47am

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i cant repost because these are not my poems :\

Capricorn · May 25, 2012, 2:56am

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Nice one. Quite sad!