Zindagi Ka Akkaas, Ek She'r

Zamil · July 16, 2006, 12:56am

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Main Aaj Idhar Se Guzarta Hoon Kaun Dekhta Hai
Main Kal Idhar Se Na Guzroon Ga Kaun Dekhe Ga
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Koyal · July 16, 2006, 2:09am

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ho sakta hia jo kal yahan betha tha wo dobara ap ko dekhay :p
PS: nice one :)

reet · July 16, 2006, 4:22am

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nice...!

mahamkhan · July 17, 2006, 12:32pm

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nice one!

Prince_Ali · July 17, 2006, 3:31pm

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Very simple but good one :k:

Sannan · July 18, 2006, 3:16am

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*nice sher but i think there is Tou before Koun *

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:40am

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Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:43am

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Thanx alottt Reet , Maham n Prince...!!! :)

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:45am

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Sannan jee…
kuch khuda ka khauf karein…!

Koyal · July 19, 2006, 1:21pm

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suna hai shaa’er log zaida soochtey nahi haiN

saghar · July 19, 2006, 7:13pm

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zabardast
thanks for sharing

usman22 · July 20, 2006, 3:40am

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nice one!!

Zamil · July 21, 2006, 8:20pm

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** **
Shairon k ilava or sochta kaun hai…!

Zamil · July 21, 2006, 8:23pm

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Saghar jee n Usman jee...!!
Bohat bohat shukria, nawazish... :)