Amal
September 1, 2003, 2:02pm
1
Dil meiN ik yaas ki dal'dal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
yuNhi kuch zehan meiN yaadoN ki kirchiyaaN heiN aur
tujh sey jis khaab meiN rishtoN ke naey bandhan baandhey
hasrateiN mar gaeiN na jaaney kab dum ghuttney sey
ab ye mushkil hey ke fasl-e-gul ko kesey samjhaaooN
inhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey they
na’janey wo kon heiN jinhey sabar ka phal bhi milta hey
By: Amal
Re: zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
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*yuNhi kuch zehan meiN yaadoN ki kirchiyaaN heiN aur
tujh sey jis khaab meiN rishtoN ke naey bandhan baandhey
hasrateiN mar gaeiN na jaaney kab dum ghuttney sey
ab ye mushkil hey ke fasl-e-gul ko kesey samjhaaooN
inhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey they
*na'janey wo kon heiN jinhey sabar ka phal bhi milta hey
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Beautiful ** Aymal **like always
system
September 1, 2003, 3:32pm
3
WOW Beautiful.. Bohat achi ghazal hai.. aik aik sheir be-had khoobsurat hai.. :k::k:
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey they
Wow Amal bhai its so gr8888 and beautiful ghazal :k::k::k::k:
thanks for sharin
Re: zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
*Originally posted by Amal: *
Dil meiN ik yaas ki dal'dal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
yuNhi kuch zehan meiN yaadoN ki kirchiyaaN heiN aur
tujh sey jis khaab meiN rishtoN ke naey bandhan baandhey
hasrateiN mar gaeiN na jaaney kab dum ghuttney sey
**inhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey theyBy: Amal
Such a wonderful piece of poetry with touchy and impressive selection of words …:k: Amal thanks for sharing with us …
**Is se zeyada aur kya dukh doon mein apni zaat ko
Re: zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
*Originally posted by Amal: *
Dil meiN ik yaas ki dal'dal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
yuNhi kuch zehan meiN yaadoN ki kirchiyaaN heiN aur
tujh sey jis khaab meiN rishtoN ke naey bandhan baandhey
hasrateiN mar gaeiN na jaaney kab dum ghuttney sey
ab ye mushkil hey ke fasl-e-gul ko kesey samjhaaooN
inhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey they
na’janey wo kon heiN jinhey sabar ka phal bhi milta hey
By: Amal
beautifull amal :k:
Daagh
September 1, 2003, 8:40pm
7
very beautiful Amal
especiallyinhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
Koyal
September 1, 2003, 9:18pm
8
Amal
September 2, 2003, 12:27pm
10
NikamiJi aaj to aap subha subha hi aan niklieN…barri baat hey ji ;)…tashreef’aawari ke leeye intehaai shukar guzaar hooN:)Koyal, sirf aaNchal ka pata hey, kis ka aaNchal hey, ye nahi pata:)***** Vivacious *, HeArT HaCKeR, Amarbail, CC, Daagh and Cap, …ghazal pasand karney ke leeye be’had shukriya:flower1:
Re: zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
[QUOTE]
yuNhi kuch zehan meiN yaadoN ki kirchiyaaN heiN aur
tujh sey jis khaab meiN rishtoN ke naey bandhan baandhey
**hasrateiN mar gaeiN na jaaney kab dum ghuttney sey
ab ye mushkil hey ke fasl-e-gul ko kesey samjhaaooN
inhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey they
na'janey wo kon heiN jinhey sabar ka phal bhi milta hey
By: Amal
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:(
Pramod
September 2, 2003, 4:49pm
12
** Amal Sahab, **
Yun the ye radif 'ke siva kuchh bhi nahiN' bahot puraana hai..bahot se shaayroN ne ese estimaal kiya hai..magar aap ka andaaz bilkul naya hai. hamesha kii tarah eik aur khubsuart ghazal aap ke kalam se padh kar bahot achha laga. ye sher to
na'janey wo kon heiN jinhey sabar ka phal bhi milta hey
bahot hii achha laga. khaas kar takhallus aur kafia ka milan bahot hii behtareen hai.
dheroN daad kubul kijiye.....
Dilsay
September 3, 2003, 10:27am
13
Wonderful.... like always.... thanks for sharing
Koyal
September 3, 2003, 8:35pm
14
*Originally posted by Amal: *Koyal, sirf aaNchal ka pata hey, kis ka aaNchal hey, ye nahi pata:)
oh tu anchal pakar k sooch rahya kis k sar pe dooN
Amal
September 4, 2003, 6:21pm
16
Pramod bhai pehley to aap ye bataiye ke aap gaeb kahaN heiN itney dinoN sey? chitthi na koi sandeis…Muddat hui aap ka koi kalaam sun’ney ko nahi mila, hum sey koi naaraazgi?
Pramod bhai aap sey pehley bhi aek dost ney yehi baat ki thi, ke is qisam ki ghazleiN pheley bhi likhi jaa chuki heiN. Lekin shaed aap ko ye sun kar heirat ho ke meri nazar sey aaj tak aesi koi ghazal nahi guzri. Anyway, I hope ke meiN ney aap logoN ko ziaada maiyoos nahi kia :~)
Dilsay & jasmeen, thanx for liking the ghazal:flower1:
nikii
September 5, 2003, 2:37pm
20
Re: zindagi ik rog-e-musalsal ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
[QUOTE]
**yuNhi kuch zehan meiN yaadoN ki kirchiyaaN heiN aur
tujh sey jis khaab meiN rishtoN ke naey bandhan baandhey
hasrateiN mar gaeiN na jaaney kab dum ghuttney sey
ab ye mushkil hey ke fasl-e-gul ko kesey samjhaaooN
inhi haathoN meiN tera haath kabhi hota tha magar
tu ney jis pal mujhey mohabbat ke phool bakhshey they
*na'janey wo kon heiN jinhey sabar ka phal bhi milta hey
By: Amal
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bhut khoubsourt hamesha ki tarah :)
ye dard koN hai jis ka anchal ap ne pakra huwa..
