Zindagi guzari

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tary baad hum jana
Kasay zindagee guzari
Har dard ko jagaya
Har yaad ko sada dee

by Dilsay

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kool:)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by MANAN: *
kool:)
[/QUOTE]

Thanks dear

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baat kuch adhori si reh gaii hay

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Re: Zindagi guzari

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Tary baad hum jana
Kasay zindagee guzari
Har dard ko jagaya
Har yaad ko sada dee

by Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

If you don't let me re-phrase it...

Teray baad kia howa yeh kiss nay jaana
Zindagi kaisay guzri yeh kiss nay jaana
Har dard nay jagaya Har dard nay sada di
Tab us nay jaana k hamain kai saza di...

by: Dr ?

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Re: Re: Zindagi guzari

:(:flower1:

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well seems like every one gets chance to practice my my writing which is good... keep it up guys.... :)

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every one ? :bummer:

was not practicing tho but thought to do some make over, I hope you didn’t mind!

Anwaar kia howa meray bachay ? :flower1:

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i did not mind i liked it

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Re: Zindagi guzari

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Tary baad hum jana
Kasay zindagee guzari
Har dard ko jagaya
Har yaad ko sada dee

by Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ?: *

If you don't let me re-phrase it...

Teray baad kia howa yeh kiss nay jaana
Zindagi kaisay guzri yeh kiss nay jaana
Har dard nay jagaya Har dard nay sada di
Tab us nay jaana k hamain kai saza di...

by: Dr ?

[/QUOTE]

:(

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:k:

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Thanks alot

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:k: