Re: ZiNdagi clerk zehanoN ki
*Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi *
Which waja are you talking about? Is it that job? Job cannot be "bewajah". You get paid for it and it is entirely upon you to 'take it or leave it.'
Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi *Phir say hayaat ko *-------------------------------
"Phir say"??? What does that defines? He was already a clerk?
Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi Phir say hayaat ko *Phir say shuru hoga Ik besilsilaywar silsila *-------------------------------
There is something starting again, according to your lines. But you did not tell us what you are referring to.
Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi Phir say hayaat ko Phir say shuru hoga Ik besilsilaywar silsila *Phir say chalaiNgay daftaroN *-------------------------------
"daftaroN" Did you mean daftar? "DaftaroN" is not fitting here at all. It could only be "phir sey chaleiN ge daftar..."
Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi Phir say hayaat ko Phir say shuru hoga Ik besilsilaywar silsila Phir say chalaiNgay daftaroN *Laykar khanay ki dibiaN *-------------------------------
Tiffin boxes are carried by many. Is there anything inferior about it?
Ik bewajah si wajah mil jaygi Phir say hayaat ko Phir say shuru hoga Ik besilsilaywar silsila Phir say chalaiNgay daftaroN Laykar khanay ki dibiaN *Phir say hoga bewajaah hi Intazaar shaam ko *-------------------------------
Shaam ka intazaar bewajaah kiuN? Are you referring to chutti time? Wo to sab ko hota hey. School ke waqt sey ley kar office tak.
Actually, I am unable to find the concept within the poem itself. I can see it only in your title. I am very, very sorry, but with due respect, it's not making any sense to me.
PS: By any chance do you read what others post in Shora-e-Gupshup?