This is someting that i wrote couple of years back… just thought to share it with you all today 
and no its not poetry but prose..and yeah its long..
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Perfecto... awsome qrius... sab theek tha sirf SARA HOA ANDA ACHA NAHI THA.. :)
Nice...I agree about the sara hua anda...But of course man was born in toil...
Re: Zindagi aik sawal
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and no its not poetry but prose..and yeah its long..
:)
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Very nice Qrius, but why do you think its prose and not poetry?...I thought it was more poetry than prose, kind of an "Azad Nazam". Nice work nonetheless :)
wow… that was marvelous…
ab is par eek jawaaba Shair bhi likh sakti haye?
oor dont you have the words for it?
would be nice if you can do that…
anyay,
well said, and well written… :k:
thanks Takha_Hara and lajawab..yes, i agree that rotten egg might sound odd..but its just all observations of the lives i have examined.
Antonio, its not blank verse when you see it on paper..i guess its just coz of my reading style that its seems that way.
hanie, the question and the answer is all in it..kay sub kuch hi zindagi hay..thanks for liking it..
weird perspective to life…but it’s all good :k:
Be good,
Zindagi :)
Nice Mashallah as usual beautiful
my gosh dats good..........:)
thank you khanzada, nia and punjabi kuri :)
Wow…that was great, Sameen :k:…the egg part was kinda funny hehe…but really nice
thx for sharin’…
where was I Ghum…
I will listen again…
maazrat baji…
bohat khobsorat sameen baji..
wat is gadagari??? :confused?
gr8! thanx for sharing
sara howa anda lol