Re: zara se baysakooni hai
a minor correction is required:
tumhray dil kay darwzay par meri yaad ki dastak
meri jaan ab nahi hoti
meri jaan ab nahi hota
kay teri yaad aye too
tumhari ankh bhar aye
duain mangtay lahmay
mujhay tum bhool jati ho
Otherwise a beautifull narration of state of, i would say, cofusion; that is too common in this era of too many opportunities of over-occupation, where emotions are supressed and availability of time, for even ones ownself , is scarce. :)