ZAMEEN O AASMAN

KABHI KISI KO POORA JAHAN NAHIN MILTA
KABHI ZAMEEN TO KABHI AASMAN NAHIN MILTA


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Thanks

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Correction...
Kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahan nahi milta,
Kahin zamiN to Kahin Aasma Nahi milta...

Jise bhi dekhye wo apne aap me gum hai,
ZubaN mili hai magar hum ZubaN nahi milta...

Tere Jahan me Aisa nahi ke pyar na ho,
Jahan Ummeed ho iski wahan nahi milta...

Please Be informed that from the next time kindly post others poetry to intikhaab...

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[quote=Saud_Musheer]
Correction...
Kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahan nahi milta,
Kahin zamiN to Kahin Aasma Nahi milta...

Saud Sahib, Aap ne jo intikhaab paish kiya hai, woh thora muhtalif zaroor hai lakin yaksaan nahin hai us "KALAM" se jo maine post kiya hai. Kabhi kabhi ye ain mumkin hota hai ke kuch sher miltey jultey hain lakin husn-e-intifaaq se. So this is "KALAM" not intikhaab.

Shukria.