**Muqaddar aazmaanay mein
Zamanaay beet jaatay hain
Muraadain dil ki paanay mein
Zamaanay beet jaatay hain
Nahe rakhta koi himmat
Agar izhaar-e-ulfat ki
Zubaan per baat laanay mein
Zamaanay beet jaatay hain
Muhabbat zindagi mein jo
Bari mushkil se milti hai
Magar us ko nibhaanay mein
Zamaanay beet jaatay hain
Agar ek baar aankhoon mein
Achanak aa basay koi
Ussay dil se bhulaanay mein
Zamaanay beet jaatay hain …
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Re: ~~ Zamaanay Beet Jaatay Hain ~~
Arif u really share some really cool poetry ..... but i really appreciate if you take some break in posting your threads like today you've posted continuously 4 threads. Actually many peoples love to read different posters but if they saw only one poster on a whole page their interest killed at the same time ... Please don't get my remarks -vely bcoz I love to read read your poetry a lot but it always give Mazza if you post only one good poetry in a day or 2 so most of the peoples get chance to read it .......
My this advise of others as well ....................
Re: ~~ Zamaanay Beet Jaatay Hain ~~
v true amerbail.
Re: ~~ Zamaanay Beet Jaatay Hain ~~
nicee … :k:
Arif u really share some really cool poetry ..... but i really appreciate if you take some break in posting your threads like today you've posted continuously 4 threads. Actually many peoples love to read different posters but if they saw only one poster on a whole page their interest killed at the same time ... Please don't get my remarks -vely bcoz I love to read read your poetry a lot but it always give Mazza if you post only one good poetry in a day or 2 so most of the peoples get chance to read it ....... My this advise of others as well ....................
My Dear Friend,
The only reason what made me to post more than one thread is only that I want to keep moving this Intekhab section, I want guppies not only come here to read but to share their collection of poetries as well ... Which I have failed to witnessed ... I have noted down your suggestion and will act Inshallah as advised.
Thank you for appreciating my contributions ...
Cheers ...
Arif
Re: ~~ Zamaanay Beet Jaatay Hain ~~
When i was new i was doing the same thing like many other people then my respectful mod Amal told me to post threads in alternative days it is not because he or anyone hate too many threads in a day it was because he told me if i do that i will get a positive feedback because everyone don't come online daily and they did not get a chance to read good poetry because of too much new threads.Hope every one get my senior mod Amal's point.Thanks
My Dear Friend, The only reason what made me to post more than one thread is only that I want to keep moving this Intekhab section, I want guppies not only come here to read but to share their collection of poetries as well ... Which I have failed to witnessed ... I have noted down your suggestion and will act Inshallah as advised. Thank you for appreciating my contributions ... Cheers ... Arif
Thanks for the understanding ....
When i was new i was doing the same thing like many other people then my respectful mod Amal told me to post threads in alternative days it is not because he or anyone hate too many threads in a day it was because he told me if i do that i will get a positive feedback because everyone don't come online daily and they did not get a chance to read good poetry because of too much new threads.Hope every one get my senior mod Amal's point.Thanks
Exactly SID, i was just waiting someone to say this :) In the beginning, Me too was doing the same thing ;)
Beautiful Choice:)