zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Hatim_Jawed March 18, 2012, 8:41am 1

****GHAZAL

Zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai |
kitni doo’r abhi manzil hai ??

Tum ko kaun thikana dega ?
Khud gharqaab abhi sahil hai ||

Kitni deir laRega akhir ?
Sau gham aur akela dil hai ||

Khud par chand na ho kyoN naazaN ?
Uss meiN husn tera shamil hai ||

uss ki jeet yaqeenan hogi |
MaaN ka qurb usay hasil hai ||

Dariya paas luboN par khushki |
Kya JAWED issi qabil hai ??
?****

jiia March 18, 2012, 9:00am 2

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

:k:KIA ZABARDAST GHAZAL KAHI AP NE
AKHRI SHAIR MI TO KAMAL KER DIA:wub:

sfaseehrabbani March 18, 2012, 5:37pm 3

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

بہت خوب بھائی حاتم جاوید صاحب

بہت اچھی غزل ہے، داد قبول کیجیے۔

muqawwee123 March 18, 2012, 6:18pm 4

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Nice ghazal Hatim Bhai :k:

UZ March 20, 2012, 5:27am 5

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Very nice ghazal hatim :k:

Hatim_Jawed March 20, 2012, 8:17am 6

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Aap tamam ahbaab ka behad shukrguzaar hooN k aap sab ne merey hausloN ko quwat bakhshi aur doaaoN say nawaza.Aap sab sada khush raheiN.

ilhtdubai March 20, 2012, 5:26pm 7

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Unse milne ko jo sochon ab wo zamana nhi
Ghar bhi kaise jaun ab to koi bahana nahi,,
Mujhe yaad rakhna kahi tum bhola na dena
Mana ke barson se teri gali me anajana nhi,,

Sannan March 26, 2012, 9:03am 8

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Kitni deir laRega akhir ?
Sau gham aur akela dil hai

Wah luttaf aa gia parh kar :k:

lethal_kamikaze March 26, 2012, 4:22pm 9

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Nice. but Nice. :)

muqawwee123 March 26, 2012, 4:24pm 10

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lethal_kamikaze March 26, 2012, 4:28pm 11

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Woh kehtain hain na

Kiyon toh acha lagta hy
Waqt mila to sochain gain :)

muqawwee123 March 26, 2012, 4:44pm 12

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Acha aur jab waqt mile ga to sirf sochen ge...

lethal_kamikaze March 26, 2012, 4:45pm 13

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Ji

muqawwee123 March 26, 2012, 4:47pm 14

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Matlab sirf sochna nahin, jake bolna bhi mangta

lethal_kamikaze March 26, 2012, 4:49pm 15

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I’m thinking

Hatim_Jawed March 31, 2012, 3:55pm 16

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Hausla-afzaai ka bahot-2 shukriya sannan bhai !

muqawwee123 March 31, 2012, 3:55pm 17

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Hatim Bhai.. naya kalaam kahan hai?

LP March 31, 2012, 4:23pm 18

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Too good

Hatim_Jawed April 2, 2012, 4:31pm 19

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Thnx , Thnx nd Thnx

Hatim_Jawed April 2, 2012, 4:40pm 20

Re: zakhmi paaoN safar mushkil hai

Thnk u vry mch.