system
April 3, 2011, 11:08pm
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**By: Sehar
Apnay chaalo ki baazi hum per chala gaye
Dur badar ki tohkaray toh ruftar lay chali
Itni zilat say hergiz hum na guzaray thay
Sach-e-ishq ki toli jo tu nay tukra di
Re: Zakhme-Dil…
is main larney marne ki baat hoing
Re: Zakhme-Dil…
**By: Sehar
Apnay chaalo ki baazi hum per chala gaye
Dur badar ki tohkaray toh ruftar lay chali
Itni zilat say hergiz hum na guzaray thay
Sach-e-ishq ki toli jo tu nay tukra di
Wah Wah Ap to Poetess bhe hai :k:
system
April 4, 2011, 9:06pm
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Re: Zakhme-Dil…
ehsan:
achha kalam hai. :k:
thanks ;)… Dil ki baat hai…
Ap ko abhi maloom para? lol…
Shazia_Arif:
nice effort.
Thanks… dil se likhi hui shayri hai…
Re: Zakhme-Dil…
**By: Sehar
Apnay chaalo ki baazi hum per chala gaye
Dur badar ki tohkaray toh ruftar lay chali
Itni zilat say hergiz hum na guzaray thay
Sach-e-ishq ki toli jo tu nay tukra di
:k: very nice Sehar… keep writing
system
April 5, 2011, 1:32am
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Re: Zakhme-Dil…
I don’t think I would need to write anymore… This probably summarized my pain but I will write poetry over successful life once I completely make myself blind in it…
Sannan
April 5, 2011, 1:46pm
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Re: Zakhme-Dil…
yah Chalo ya’ni chaloon hay kia ?
Re: Zakhme-Dil....
Ap ko abhi maloom para? lol...
..
Maloom per gaya yehi bhut hai :)
system
April 5, 2011, 5:02pm
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Re: Zakhme-Dil…
achi baat hai, yahan bhe meri thread ko lock na ker daina…
chalo means strategy
khush haali … not khush haal
Sannan
April 6, 2011, 6:32am
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Re: Zakhme-Dil....
achi baat hai, yahan bhe meri thread ko lock na ker daina....
chalo means strategy
khush haali ..... not khush haal
Then this is not suitable with this she'r by grammatically ...........
system
April 6, 2011, 10:38pm
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Re: Zakhme-Dil....
Then this is not suitable with this she'r by grammatically ...........
Apnay chaalo ki baazi hum per chala gaye
Sannan
April 7, 2011, 5:23am
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Re: Zakhme-Dil…
system
April 8, 2011, 12:39am
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Re: Zakhme-Dil…
kya? :p… I dont understand a single thing you have written here…
(Me)
