Zakhm-e-tanhai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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zakhm-e-tanhai main khushbu-e-hina kis ki thi
saya diwar pe mera tha sada kis ki thi

uski raftar se lipti rahi meri ankhen
us ne mur kar bhi na dekha k wafa kis ki thi

waqt ki tarah dabe panw ye kaun aya hai
main andhera jise samjha wo qaba kis ki thi

ansuon se hi sahi bhar gaya daman mera
hath to main ne uthaye the dua kis ki thi

meri ahon ki zaban koi samajhta kaise
zindagi itni dukhi mere siwa kis ki thi

ag se dosti us ki thi jala ghar mera
di gai kis ko saza aur khata kis ki thi

main ne binaiyan bo kar bhi andhere kate
kis k bas main thi zamin abr-o-hawa kis ki thi

chor di kis liye tu ne “Muzaffar” duniya
justaju si tujhe har waqt bata kis ki thi

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

V nyc UZ

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Lovely!

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Bahut umdaah UZ …:k:

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

nice nice

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Ye Ghazal ko Nazm style say kyuN likha ya copy paste ki hay ? :-d

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Thanks everyone :slight_smile:

Gul :smiley: copy paste kiya ahi :snooty: Magar mein ney pasand to ker li naa :snooty:

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

very nice :k:

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zabardast Ghazal hai Muzaffar saaHab kii...han G-e-T ne saHeeH farmaayaa k ash'aar ke beech ek line Khaalii chhoR diyaa kareN taa k ham use bhar sakeN lol...good selection UZ :)

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

OK done KKF :D Thanks for liking it :)

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

waah…ab hui na baat…ab nikli hai chaand sii Ghazal…vaise, can i FILL UP the blank lines? hahaha :omg: :smiley:

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

haan haan ker do :emmy: eik to mein sher ko likhnay ki tini koshish kerti hoon but kaya karoon :bummer:

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Zakhm e Tanhaie :( :)

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

wonderful :)

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Thanks daanie
Waleed why so sad :(

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Awesome UZ..

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Re: Zakhm-e-tanhai

Lovely ghazal UZ :):k:

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Thanks Fara and Amal :)