yuuN hai ki tujhe bhuul ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

NikamiJano · September 8, 2002, 12:41pm

khud apneY liye baiTh ke socheN geiN kisi diN
yuuN hai ki tujhe bhuul ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

bhaTake hue phirteY haiN kai lafz jo dil meiN
duniyaa ne diyaa vaqt to likkheN geiN kisi diN

hil jayengeY ik baar to arshoN ke dar-o-baam
ye Khaak_nashee’N log jo boleN geiN kisi diN

aapas ki kisi baat kaa miltaa hi nahiN vaqt
har baaR ye kahteY haiN ke baiTheN geiN kisi diN

aiY jaan teri yaad ke be-naam parindeY
shaaKhoN pe mere dard ki utaraY geiN kisi diN

jaati hai kisi jheel ki gaharaa_ii kahaaN tak
aankhoN meiN teri duub ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

khushbu se bhari shaam meiN jugnu k qalam se
ik nazm tereY vaasteY likkheN geiN kisi diN

Khushbu ki tarah asl-e-sabaa Khaak numaa se
galiyoN se tereY shahaR ki guzRein geiN kisi din

‘Amjad’ hai yahi ab ke kafaN baaNdh ke saR se
us shahar-e-sitam_gaar meiN jaaye’N geiN kisi diN

guybrush · September 8, 2002, 1:35pm

its beautiful :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 8, 2002, 3:07pm

*bhaTake hue phirteY haiN kai lafz jo dil meiN
duniyaa ne diyaa vaqt to likkheN geiN kisi diN *

Beautiful:~)
Thanks for sharing NJ sis:)

chand_chehra · September 8, 2002, 4:11pm

very Nice1 jano gi :)

Sohaib · September 8, 2002, 5:12pm

bohut zaburdust.......
sheer emotions..

Amal · September 8, 2002, 5:13pm

Re: yuuN hai ki tujhe bhuul ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

Khushbu sey bhari shaam meiN jugnu ke qalam sey
ik nazm terey waastey…**hmmmm…zaroor **

fawadahmed · September 8, 2002, 5:31pm

it was marvellous how the feelings hav been converted to words.

nikii · September 8, 2002, 9:14pm

bhut khoob nikami janu ji :k:

Pramod · September 9, 2002, 7:03am

aiY jaan teri yaad ke be-naam parindeY
shaaKhoN pe mere dard ki utaraY geiN kisi diN

jaati hai kisi jheel ki gaharaa_ii kahaaN tak
aankhoN meiN teri duub ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

Wow...Great choice to Share , Bahna.

NikamiJano · September 10, 2002, 12:41am

thanks G-E-T...saby..niki..guybrush.......:)

NikamiJano · September 10, 2002, 12:42am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
very Nice1 jano gi :)
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thanks chando g aur kidher ho ap.....ph be nahi uthaia..:(

NikamiJano · September 10, 2002, 12:44am

Re: Re: yuuN hai ki tujhe bhuul ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

thanks…hmmmmm…khush fahmi..

NikamiJano · September 10, 2002, 12:45am

tthanks fawadahmaad and welcome here…

NikamiJano · September 10, 2002, 12:46am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
aiY jaan teri yaad ke be-naam parindeY
shaaKhoN pe mere dard ki utaraY geiN kisi diN

jaati hai kisi jheel ki gaharaa_ii kahaaN tak
aankhoN meiN teri duub ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

Wow...Great choice to Share , Bahna.
[/QUOTE]

many thanks Pra g........:)

hanie · September 10, 2002, 7:38am

mehfil loot li aap ne nikammi …
intehaa zabardast haye… :k: …

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 10, 2002, 9:05am

oh mujhei nahie boohlena nikami sister warna mei :crying:

achie poetry send khii

Capricorn · September 10, 2002, 4:51pm

Re: yuuN hai ki tujhe bhuul ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

jaati hai kisi jheel ki gaharaa_ii kahaaN tak
aankhoN meiN teri duub ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

[/QUOTE]

oho;)

NikamiJano · September 11, 2002, 12:15am

Really…thanks anyways…

NikamiJano · September 11, 2002, 12:16am

pahlay ap ko yaad tu kar lain sis phir dekhtey bholna ya nahi

thanks and welcome here:)

NikamiJano · September 11, 2002, 12:17am

Re: Re: yuuN hai ki tujhe bhuul ke dekheN geiN kisi diN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

oho;)
[/QUOTE]

............:).........;)