yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

awaaz k gunchaY yunhi khaamoosh nahi theY
ik baRaf ki sill jesa chaRara tha jigaR maiN

kis kaRab sehaR tashna dahaN dekh raha tha
taptaY huwey sehaRa’oN ka para tha jigaR maiN

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

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Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

:teary3: bohat khoob chando g thanks 4 sharin…
ap ka sher par k hamin apni dharkaN ki yaad a gaye :teary3:

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Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Beautiful choice CC:k:…thanx for sharing:)

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yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

excellent :k:

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Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

excellent choice:k::k:
thanks :flower1:

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Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

awaaz k gunchaY yunhi khaamoosh nahi theY
ik baRaf ki sill jesa chaRara tha jigaR maiN

kis kaRab sehaR tashna dahaN dekh raha tha
taptaY huwey sehaRa'oN ka para tha jigaR maiN

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN
[/QUOTE]

Bohat Khoob! Chando Jee...
Thanks for sharing! :)

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Very nice...

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yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

Wah

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nice work chand :k:

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yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

nice

naa chandaa naa..itna zulm nahin kerte jiger k saath.. ye bhi koio khelne kii cheez hai..chalo dil tak to thik tha....jigar ko to baksh diya hota.. ab daikho bhala aisee zaalim logon ko jigar mein utaar liyyaa hai koi baat bhala...mashwara hii kiytaa hota hamse..

well in short nice choice.

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Great People Great Choice :k:

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bohat khoob, beautiful :k::k:

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thanks every1 :flower1:

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by weteyes82: *
*yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

nice

naa chandaa naa..itna zulm nahin kerte jiger k saath.. ye bhi koio khelne kii cheez hai..chalo dil tak to thik tha....jigar ko to baksh diya hota.. ab daikho bhala aisee zaalim logon ko jigar mein utaar liyyaa hai koi baat bhala...mashwara hii kiytaa hota hamse..

well in short nice choice.
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dil becharay par pahlay hi bohat zulm hogya tha hum nay socha
usko rest dillain :D

wasay agarmujhay pata hota kay ap kaha payejatay to zaroor mashwara karlati :p

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bhut khoob chandoo :k:

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hey chanda.. :)
very nice....
phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN
sheshay ki tarhan :)...... shesha tot kay kirchian chubho gaya :)

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buhat khoob :k:

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Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Aisay log aisa hee karta hain…beauitful ghazal BTW :k: 5th verse kahan hai? :smiley:

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Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

[/QUOTE]

Chalye wo tou zalim tha hi... aap kya raste se haat nai saktii theen?

mazaq aapni ajgha... must say zoak acha hai. :)

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Re: Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Read this :-
ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

Aise environ ko dekh kar koi kaise hatte? Aap pagal ho kia? :blush: