YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi
jesey chahsm-e-tar meiN khaab koi pareshaaN hey aaj bhi

meiN zindagi ki raah-guzar pe dar-badar hooN is leeye
ke mohabbatoN ke shehar meiN dil be’makaaN hey aaj bhi

teri aarzu hey bohat magar meri pohaNch nahi hey is qadar
meri khuwaahishoN ke waastey tu aasmaaN hey aaj bhi

meiN toheed ke har hisaab sey wesey to musalmaan hooN
par tujhey poojney ki baat hey, to dil be’imaaN hey aaj bhi

teri anjuman tera har karam, teri chahateiN to chin gaeeN
magar dard jo mera naseeb bana, wo meharbaaN hey aaj bhi

teri azyatoN ka sawaal hey to mujhey kal bhi zabt pe naaz tha
tujhey kosney ki baat hey to dil be’zubaaN hey aaj bhi

kabhi dard had sey barrha bhi to meiN teri had sey barrha nahi
meri to saaNs ki tasbeeyoN meiN ik tu hi rawaaN hey aaj bhi

so baadloN ke silsiley meri chatt pe baras kar chaley gaey
par jala jala, dhuwaaN dhuwaaN mera aashyaaN hey aaj bhi

mujhey kal miley they kuch gulaab jo terey leeye ye keh gaey
ke terey intizaar meiN sog’waar gulshan ka samaaN hey aaj bhi

By: Amal

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nice :k:

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Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

sigh

pori ghazal hi achhi Amal jee … per especially 2nd shair to ghazab ka he :k:

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buhat Khoob :k:

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nice:k:

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Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

bohat bohat bohat khubsurat gazal :k:

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Hmm Bohot khoob:k:

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bhut hi zabersdast :k:

:slight_smile:

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Amal,
I read some of your ghazals. They are great. keep it up.

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Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

beautiful :k:

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Lafz kam partay jaa rahe haiN Amal ji :)

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it is beautiful as usual:k::slight_smile:

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Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *


meiN zindagi ki raah-guzar pe dar-badar hooN is leeye
ke mohabbatoN ke shehar meiN dil be'makaaN hey aaj bhi

teri aarzu hey bohat magar meri pohaNch nahi hey is qadar
meri khuwaahishoN ke waastey tu aasmaaN hey aaj bhi

meiN toheed ke har hisaab sey wesey to musalmaan hooN
par tujhey poojney ki baat hey, to dil be'imaaN hey aaj bhi

kabhi dard had sey barrha bhi to meiN teri had sey barrha nahi
meri to saaNs ki tasbeeyoN meiN ik tu hi rawaaN hey aaj bhi

so baadloN ke silsiley meri chatt pe baras kar chaley gaey
par jala jala, dhuwaaN dhuwaaN mera aashyaaN hey aaj bhi

mujhey kal miley they kuch gulaab jo terey leeye ye keh gaey
ke terey intizaar meiN sog'waar gulshan ka samaaN hey aaj bhi

By: Amal
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Very Beautiful Ghazal Amal Ji, just amazing, Thanks for sharing :)

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wao.....so many lovely people turn up to appreciate me...am so glad
and so thankful:) ... pasandeedgi ke leeye aap sab dostoN ka be'had shukriya :)

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Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

teri aarzu hey bohat magar meri pohaNch nahi hey is qadar
meri khuwaahishoN ke waastey tu aasmaaN hey aaj bhi

kabhi dard had sey barrha bhi to meiN teri had sey barrha nahi
meri to saaNs ki tasbeeyoN meiN ik tu hi rawaaN hey aaj bhi

mujhey kal miley they kuch gulaab jo terey leeye ye keh gaey
ke terey intizaar meiN sog'waar gulshan ka samaaN hey aaj bhi

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** Aymal ** Beautiful like always again no words........sorry am bit late but it's never too late ha na ;)


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kabhi dard had sey barrha bhi to meiN teri had sey barrha nahi
meri to saaNs ki** tasbeeyoN **meiN ik tu hi rawaaN hey aaj bhi
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Amal ye baat thei tu pahlay bata daitey hamari tasbee tuut gaye thei saudia se mangwai abhi ...:)

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bohttttttttttt acheiiiiiiii :k: :slight_smile:

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NikamiJi bohat bohat shukriya…go ke aaap
ke paas hamaarey leeye alfaaz khatm ho gaey heiN,
lekin hum phir bhi aap ko khush’aamdeid kehtey heiN:flower1::slight_smile:
Wesey aap ka dekha-dekhi ~Sehar~ ke paas
bhi hamaarey leeye “Lafz kam partay jaa rahe haiN” …
dekhye ab is ke baad kis ki baari hey :frowning:

Thanx a lot Masoom Muskaan:slight_smile:

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Amal it’s Really Awwsome waqie he lufz nahi hai aur me tu Nikami bilkul ap kia umeed karo gaye hum se …:frowning:

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Re: Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

naaaaa…

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Re: Re: Re: YuN maatmi sey libaas meiN koi aah-o-fagaaN hey aaj bhi

:confused: