You've taken away my looks, my identity

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

jiia February 24, 2015, 12:53pm 1

Chaap Tilak

You’ve taken away my looks, my identity, by just a glance.
By making me drink the wine of love-potion,
You’ve intoxicated me by just a glance;
My fair, delicate wrists with green bangles in them,
Have been held tightly by you with just a glance.
I give my life to you, Oh my cloth-dyer,
You’ve dyed me in yourself, by just a glance.
I give my whole life to you Oh, Nijam,~~ Hazrat NIZAMUDDIN AULIYA ~~

You’ve made me your bride, by just a glance.

by

AMEER KHUSRU
http://www.iloveindia.com/literature/gifs/amir-khusro-urdu-poet.jpg

Ali_Syed February 24, 2015, 2:08pm 2

Re: You've taken away my looks, my identity

What language or accent is this?

muqawwee123 February 24, 2015, 2:13pm 3

Re: You've taken away my looks, my identity

Hindvi :p

KhaRi boli or Birj Bhasha

OYMWA February 24, 2015, 2:18pm 4

Re: You've taken away my looks, my identity

Think its Brij bhasha. He used to write in several languages including persian and brij

lethal_kamikaze February 24, 2015, 2:18pm 5

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Brij

Ali_Syed February 24, 2015, 10:31pm 6

Re: You've taken away my looks, my identity

Oh ok, I have heard the song by naheed akhtar, didn't realise that the lyrics were so different...

muqawwee123 February 25, 2015, 3:46pm 7

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

Naheed Akhtar wale version main saari lines hain siwae teesri line ke. bechari Zia daur main PTV pe ye bayyaN pakaRne wali poetry kaise ga sakti thi

mahool February 25, 2015, 3:55pm 8

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Chittiyan kalaian

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpsVpnvFfZQ

hybridkamal February 25, 2015, 4:05pm 9

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

i like this song, full of energy…

jiia February 25, 2015, 5:51pm 10

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@mahool @hybridkamal

yi DESI LOOK apki type post nhai hy

mahool February 25, 2015, 6:02pm 11

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

to phir hamary type ki post karain…

jiia February 25, 2015, 6:05pm 12

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

likh to dia
esi behuda es thread me to post nhai kia sakta

mahool February 25, 2015, 6:48pm 13

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

kafi deer kay bad samjha aya… naya gana

jiia February 25, 2015, 6:50pm 14

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

aa gaya na :halo:

ab sunty rahen ja k

mahool February 25, 2015, 6:51pm 15

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

sun lon ga…

jiia February 25, 2015, 6:56pm 16

Re: You’ve taken away my looks, my identity

kabhi kabhi achi chezen bhi sunni chaiay :halo:

hybridkamal February 26, 2015, 5:08pm 17

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jiia February 27, 2015, 12:58pm 18

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hybridkamal February 27, 2015, 4:16pm 19

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