You've been mused

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Acha, well hiccup is a slave driver and wants to push us to our limits. So you'll be stuck here for some time more. Better call some reinforcements.

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I already called for refreshments.

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He is dying, he is dying not
I lied to keep you in my palm

I can see your bones with my fist tight
shut

I induced your nightmares
my eyes wide
open

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hahaha! hiccy are you trying to be a comedian or a literary genius? :stuck_out_tongue:
what genre of poetry is this anyway? It reminds me of Shakespeares couplets and “shall i compare thee to a summers day” type poetry.

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Antique bones
I shall grind you to the ground

and if you cry
i shall collect
and lick

I have no sympehty for those
hard
of hearing.

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trying cattie? Im offended :p

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I seriously think that you have no idea what your own words mean :p and that you're getting a kick out of confuddling the guppies.

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Baby I don't understand
just why we can't be lovers
let it go
if you want me girl let me know
i am down on my knees
i cant take it anymore

For hiccup.

(I ripped off n sync ad verbatim)

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Thats cute catty. I write alot more than I post “for” “the guppies” :stuck_out_tongue:

for sarah:

I’ll hit YOU one more time :mad:

(my work is entirely my own, anything that vaguely resembles anything else is purely coincidential)

edit: thatfor needed its own quotation marks

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my mother left her hair for me when she died
waiting for me in a silver chest
i cant see october over your head
i ran after ismar
felt the sweat pool under my new buds
now all my black flowers have blossomed
i still cant see october over your head

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edit

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ok here's my bit:

you make me feel
yes you make me feel
shiny and new
like a virgin
touched for the very first time
there's nothing to hide
like a virgin

(Madonna took my lyrics I swear. Ok, I'm outta here. I always hated poetry.)

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i dug a well in my heart as deep as i could go
dont you know
my emotions are an exhaustable resource
i gave a waterfalls worth of liquid to you
and im left here sweating shaking spent
got my bag of chips here again
the bite of you in the back of my teeth, the touch of you down to my feet
dont you know your laughter sounds like bible to me
my fingertips orange with manufactured cheese
will you lick them this time
youve walked away from an empty tank
sediment of need
spare some liquid for me
wash my fingertips clean

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i dont wanna be a woman today
dont wanna hear the crackle of the garbage bag in the rain
can i keep it there in its wet misery
you know its pouring just like i imagined
so can you come meet me down in lahore
theres this stretch of grass near the road
where my father cooked sheep brains on coals
we musta killed a few trees this way
so its three am
are you gutsy enough to run down the middle of the road with me
walk over that piece of turd
i wonder how many strays dogs were killed today
dont wanna be a woman just now
can i dig my heels in your armpits
rock me like a swing
i dont think you can run as fast as me

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yo ho yo ho
a pirate's life for me

shrugs I tried.

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youre my plumber yeah yeah
F U C K it.

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finally i saw u...

naked , exposed, un-dressed

i peeped into u ,
by just peeping into the thread

u r lovely
yet so ugly n black

if u short of blood
how come u grow those nails?

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good god :smiley:
You all still bussy :hehe:

keep it up, some really nice ones :slight_smile: