Yonhee hansi hansi main!

P_G · August 24, 2008, 5:15pm

Younhi hansi hansi main hum

Dillo’n se khel jaatay hain

Koi choti si teekh’ee baat

Koi chubh’ta hua jumla

Koi zehar aalood lehja

Koi be’zarar si zomaani baat

Sun’ney walay kay dil par ghao laga jati hai

Phir kitni hi talaafi kay marham lagao

Woh aansoo’n jo aankh se girta hi nahi

Andar hi andar jam jaata hai

Baraf par giray, Mosam kay qatray ki tarah

Aur woh baraf toh shayad

Waqt ki garmi se, pighal jaati hai

Magar woh qatra!!!

Jab pighalnay lagta hai, phail jaata hai

Barh jaata hai, bas khatam nahi hota

**Aur yuon hi hansi hansi main hum
**
Dillo’n se khel jaatay hain

Dushwari · August 24, 2008, 5:18pm

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

very nice thoughts in this poem. amazing. very good free verse.
you should write more.

:>

P_G · August 24, 2008, 5:35pm

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

^ yeh mainy to nahi likhee lakin : S

_Masoom_Muskaan · August 24, 2008, 9:07pm

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

^copy paste to ke he

Shab-e-Hijar · August 25, 2008, 2:42am

very nice .. n true as well

redidentity · August 25, 2008, 3:57am

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

beautiful..

P_G · August 25, 2008, 7:06am

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

thanx girls : )

Shab-e-Hijar · August 25, 2008, 7:09am

Ahmar girl to nahi

Koyal · August 26, 2008, 3:32am

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

nice PG :)

EEMAAN · August 26, 2008, 2:12pm

Re: Yonhee hansi hansi main!

Nice..