i came up with this flow for this gul like 2 weeks back and ive pasted it on some other chatin forums and some sane ppl seem to be liking it so i thought to put it over here.
im gonna say this once to ur face,
then im gonna smack u back down in ur place
when i met u girl u were sweet as honey adoreable as bugs bunny
we laughed and joked like it was all too funny
but now i see the truth and realise,
with u its never anything but deceit and lies
now all i hear is that i dont treat u right
but i aint the one whoz got another life
all i feel now is the pain and strife
and to think for a moment i considered u as my wife
but things changed so abruptly
u showed ur true colours and accused me for treatin corruptly
Defined me as one of thos WANA BE sillyz
n now u cud be seen with this dork
who is ABCD but cant even eat using FORK
he must be contagious like isley said,
cuz now u gona be lyig again in a ditch and ur head will look red
bizaatch WATEVER I TOLD U WAS A LIE TOO .. u were never so CRED
as a mater of truth u were as STINGY as SOAKED bread
anyhow ! its the end and i aint got time to waste on you no more
so get out my house u fkin whe
dont say that i m a wana be MC or somethin .. its just one of thos lil flows i spit .. if u wana add any of urs … PLZ DO!
i suggest to talk to her openly and honestly
and see whats bugging her n makin her act funny
if she was sweet like honey in the past
that means her love for u must still last
hope things r nice n rosy with u guys again
and u get over this phase of pain
well its kinda wierd but this flow is not true
it got some real feelings but my lyfe n this story has nothin to do
but its just i see loadz of guys geting fooool
offering their head n end up getin their heart pierced by some arse hole
no one carez abt onez feeling and the slain of their soul
its more like a GAME .. keep kickin untill u hit the goal. thnx for replyin IREM baji
DMHN: it took me like 12-13 minz n thnx for liking it
hey i m abt to do it again
or shud i say , upto loosing it again
but u know i hold the game
so leme post some more of my bias, but pls dont say its lame :S
i dont need no flirts shagin my lyfe till end
hate wana be bzatches … more like american desi mix blend
opening a new trend, dont care if one get offend
n as i mentioned it already gona say it once more
therz nothin truth in it so y tryna blore ?
wat r u tryna prove ? waste time on a gul n try to get to know her or explore
man i ma PAKI GUY , i cant stick with one BECOZ YEH DIL MANGE MORE lol
btw it was not a song was just a flow
yall cant stand the level becoz of bieng slow
How long it take you to write the whole thing? It’s pretty good.
thnx for replyin IREM baji
n thnx for liking it 
no actually, it didn’t take you as long as I thought it would have.
lol