Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Yei kaisi khushboo pheli hai,main aa gai kis bahaar main
Dushman meray aaj! meray muddahon ki qataar main

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

very nice

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Yei kaisi khushboo pheli hai,main aa gaya kis wairaanay main
Dost bhi jahan ! kar jatay hain waar anjanay main

Yei kaisi khushboo pheli hai,main aa gaya kis paagal khanay main
Hukamran jahan kay aaj ! bik jatay hain aath aanay main

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli…

^ :hehe:

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

lol,aap mazahiya poet ban saktay hain,go n try :D

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

Beautiful sher :)

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

Has a deep meaning! Very nice.

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

wah wah wah. Especially the second one.:D

Bachpan
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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

thanx for appreciation

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Thanx. :D

Thanx for suggestion! but not interested.:D

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Ohhhhhhhhhh! very beautiful.. it's superb. Asma U r rite bohat meaningful shair hai

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli…

Yeh kaisi khushboo pheli hai, main aa gayi kis k QUOTE main
Dost bhi jahan! sirf aate hain Dil Diya DEhleez main :halo:

plz don’t mind:D

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

funny poet bana ja sakta hai... very nice.. :)

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli…

I didn’t mind. :slight_smile:

but what do u mean by “sirf aate hain Dil Diya DEhleez main”??

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

Nice hiba

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Re: Yei kaisi khushboo pheli....

nice hiba!