**Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi
Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi **
**
**Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se
Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi **
**
Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko
Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi **
**Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha
Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi **
**Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana
Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi
**
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Re: Yehi wafaa ka ....
another good poem, sunny_nicky.
true care never begs care in return.
it must not tell, though either, as what to do.
if true care is meant to be effective, then it will be noticed by the earlier uncaring one, out of own accord of that person.
yes, time is of essence in this.
poetic narrative has its own specific affect that prose does not and vis a vis.
the koi baat nahi, is very telling that koi baat hey.
no?
best,
Dushwari
Best,
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Good One Sunny_Nicky..:k:
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nice sunny.
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gud sunny sahab :k:
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THX ALL OF U :)
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Thats a beautiful sharing :k:
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sunny yar...thas amazin....
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thx canpaki n moonmine :)
