yeh ttott'tay bantay khwab meray

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Kal uss nay kaha, Azad~
aap ki aankhain bohut khoobb sorat hain
Inn main qos e qaza kay rang hain saray
Taaray say jilmilatay hain boht saray pyaray
Tumhain kia khabar …
Yeh jo rang hain saray
Sub teri mohabat kay hain
Yeh jo taray hain
Yeh bantay ttott’tay khwaab meray

Adab Arz
(Azad)

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Great you how how to put the words togather....

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Zara Nawazi hay aap ki Dilsay Jee

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Re: yeh ttott’tay bantay khwab meray

Itna baRa jhoot vo nahi bol sakti :eek:
paas se banaya ho ga :stuck_out_tongue:

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Keep it up:k:

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Re: yeh ttott'tay bantay khwab meray

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Azad: *
Kal uss nay kaha, **Azad~*
aap ki aankhain bohut khoobb sorat hain
Inn main qos e qaza kay rang hain saray
Taaray say jilmilatay hain boht saray pyaray
Tumhain kia khabar .....
Yeh jo rang hain saray
Sub teri mohabat kay hain
Yeh jo taray hain
Yeh bantay ttott'tay khwaab meray

Adab Arz
(Azad)
[/QUOTE]

MashaAllah, lucky you;)
Nice Poem dear :)

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Re: yeh ttott'tay bantay khwab meray

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Azad: *
Kal uss nay kaha, **Azad~*
aap ki aankhain bohut khoobb sorat hain
Inn main qos e qaza kay rang hain saray
Taaray say jilmilatay hain boht saray pyaray
Tumhain kia khabar .....
Yeh jo rang hain saray
Sub teri mohabat kay hain
Yeh jo taray hain
Yeh bantay ttott'tay khwaab meray

Adab Arz
(Azad)
[/QUOTE]

bouhat khoob... Aakhir aap k mehboob ne wada pora kar he liya..

**
Main aik sher likooNga tumharee aankhooN pe
wo aik sher tumhy lazawaal kar dega
**

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Re: Re: yeh ttott’tay bantay khwab meray

Humaray kahay ka to aap nay yaqeen kar liya tha :wink:

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Re: Re: yeh ttott’tay bantay khwab meray

Allah ki dain hay kabhi gharoor nahi kia :wink:

Thanks HH :k:

Humm ASweetA woh wada hi kia jo wafa ho :wink:

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:flower1:…

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Re: Re: Re: yeh ttott'tay bantay khwab meray

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

Humaray kahay ka to aap nay yaqeen kar liya tha ;)
[/QUOTE]

vo baat aur thee ye baat aur hai :D

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Re: Re: Re: Re: yeh ttott'tay bantay khwab meray

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *

vo baat aur thee ye baat aur hai :D
[/QUOTE]

kuch jalnay ki boo aa rahi hay ;)

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na na :nono:

ye jalne wala kaam hamara nahi hai, ham tou khush hotey hain doosroN ki khushi pey :stuck_out_tongue:

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lain jee gaii bhainss pani main

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bhains kis ko bola hai :mad:

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gr8

waise janab khowab nahin Lances hongay ;)...khair mazaaq apni jaga gr8 job friend :)

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Re: gr8

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by koiDost: *
waise janab khowab nahin Lances hongay ;)...khair mazaaq apni jaga gr8 job friend :)
[/QUOTE]

chalain koi to dost hay na ....... :)

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bhai ayna daikh liya hoga aap nay ghalti say .. wahi bol gia hoga :wink:

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Re: Re: gr8

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

chalain koi to dost hay na ....... :)
[/QUOTE]

jee haan pahlay sab Koi hotay Hain phir Dost bantay hain ;)

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wow