yeh saal....

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 31, 2002, 11:06pm

yeh saal bhi terae piyar ke manend guzra
jatae hoae kuch aur tha aate hoae kuch aur

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 12:19am

Thats wonderful GKK but again sad :(

guybrush · January 1, 2003, 8:13am

sad but nice shair :k:

Dilsay · January 1, 2003, 8:30am

Very nice

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 9:36am

**
Har december kay akhri din main
Har baras ki tarah ab bhi
Diary ik sawal karti hai
Kia khabar is baras kay akhir tak
Mairay in bay charagh safhon say
Kitnay hi naam kat gaye hon gay
Kitnay number bikhar kay raston main
Gard-e-maazi say att gaye hon gay
Har december main sochta hon main
Aik din is tarah bhi hona hai
Rang ko roshni main khona hai
Apnay apnay gharon main rakhi howi
Dairy dost daikhtay hon gay
In ki ankhon kay khaak dano main
Aik sehra sa phailta ho ga
Aur kuch baynishan safhon say
Naam maira kat gaya ho ga
**

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 9:58am

**
Jab aglay saal yehi wakt aaraha hoga
Yeh kaun jaanta hai kaun kis jagah hoga

Tu mere saamnay betha hai aur mein sochta hoon
Ke aatay lamhoon mein jeena bhi ek saza hoga

Yehi damaktay huwe pal dhuwan dhuwan honge
Yehi chamakta huwa din bhuja bhuja hoga

Lahoo layega, woh dhoop chahoon ka manzar
Nazar uthaonga jis simt, jhatpata hoga

Yehi jagah hai jahaan aaj hum mil ke bethay hain
Issi jagah per khuda jaanay kal ko kya hoga

Bicharnay waalay tujhe dekh dekh sochta hoon
Tu phir milega tu kitna badal chuka hoga

**

Nazam · January 1, 2003, 10:44am

Ghazal main Nazam app ghazal

Good one

arif unkle app ney yehan bhe apni nazam thosni thee
app alug post kertey tu zaida pazeraye hotee

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 8:34pm

Sorry again and I wont’ post !

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 1, 2003, 8:37pm

:( nice oneeee

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 8:52pm

Sorry again and I wont’ post !

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 2, 2003, 12:15am

PM for Arifnawaz: mujhe udass sher aur ghazal’s pasand hai:( pasand karne ka aur bohut khubsorrat ghazals post karne ka shukria:flower1::k:

PM for guybrush: thanks:flower1:

PM for Dilsay: thanks:flower1:

PM for Nazam:jee haan ap ne sahee kaha ‘ghazal mein nazam’ and thanks for pasand karne ka:flower1:

PM forHeArt HeCKeR: thanks

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 2, 2003, 12:17am

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*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *

Sorry again and I wont' post !
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Arif Nazam mazak kar rahee hai.agar tum chaho to tum yahan ghazal post kar saktae ho:)

Nazam · January 2, 2003, 10:03am

Ufooof iss sharfaat pur mein apna sur kahan phorun mazak bhe tha na Arif unkle ab uncle bhe mazak mein keha hae mind na karain sub app or ghazal usal mein app ke peom ache hote hae eslie keha takay alug thread mein sub appreciate kerein or acha bhe nahe legta kesi ke thread mein apne peotri thosna (phir uske value kum hoagti hae or app ki sub parhtey hein samgh gae na