yeh khizaan kay bahaar lamhey

Gadha · February 6, 2003, 6:34am

yeh chand lamhay kar lo band seenoun main
jubb khizaan aayee tau bahaar ko yaad karnaa
yeh chand lamhay tumhain yaad dillaien gey
kaisay hota hay khizzaan kay mosam main
khushiyoun kaa mosam suhaanaa
yeh lamhay bahaar kay hain
yeh lamhay tumhaaray apnay hain
bhar lo goud main apni
yeh chand lamhay musarrat kay!

–Gadha

Dilsay · February 6, 2003, 7:17am

Nice.............

Azad · February 6, 2003, 8:02am

hiss e khafeef to mashallah tha hi … uss par hiss e lateef … sonay par sohagha

:k:

udaasaankhein · February 6, 2003, 11:36am

mein to aap ko gadha samajhti theee....aap to poet nikle. :P
nice work.. :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 6, 2003, 12:43pm

Very Nice Ccat :p

keep it up & Thanks for sharing :)

system · February 6, 2003, 6:54pm

keep it up..

chand_chehra · February 6, 2003, 7:28pm

Nice gadha gi
keep it up :)

Capricorn · February 6, 2003, 7:37pm

What a pleasant surprise, you have feelings too…
Nice work :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 6, 2003, 7:40pm

beautiful work:k::k:
keep writing:)

Gadha · February 7, 2003, 8:51am

this was my own:(

thanks everyone.

BanJaraa · February 7, 2003, 9:21am

Bouhat khoob... an efort worthy of praise. :)

Capricorn.... wo gadha hai tou kia... feelings gadhoon ki bi hoti hain... wo alag baat hai baqi gadhay feelings expressss karne ki slahiyaat nai rakhte ;)

Maheen2002 · February 7, 2003, 3:45pm

nice :~)

Gadha · February 7, 2003, 9:52pm

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*Originally posted by Maheen2002: *
nice :~)
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Thanks:).

Banjaaray: :~)

nikii · February 7, 2003, 9:59pm

bhut khoubsourtt nazm ha :)
thanks 4 sharing :)
likan kassh lamhon ko band ya qaid kiya ja skata . .

Gadha · February 7, 2003, 10:47pm

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*Originally posted by nikii: *

likan kassh lamhon ko band ya qaid kiya ja skata . .
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yaadain kis liyeh hotii hain?:)

nikii · February 7, 2003, 11:09pm

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*Originally posted by Gadha: *
yaadain kis liyeh hotii hain?:)
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yaadein talakh hoti hain shyd

Gadha · February 7, 2003, 11:11pm

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*Originally posted by nikii: *

yaadein talakh hoti hain shyd
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zindagi kaa mazaa hee issi main hay shayad:).

nikii · February 7, 2003, 11:13pm

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*Originally posted by Gadha: *
zindagi kaa mazaa hee issi main hay shayad:).
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:( kitni ajeeb ha
likan maza kasay ha

Gadha · February 7, 2003, 11:14pm

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*Originally posted by nikii: *

:( kitni ajeeb ha
likan maza kasay ha
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bilkil waisay jaisay ghumm naa hotaa tau khushi ki qadar naa hotii... kitnaa tavazun rakhaa hay ALLAH nay...:).

nikii · February 7, 2003, 11:17pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Gadha: *
bilkil waisay jaisay ghumm naa hotaa tau khushi ki qadar naa hotii... kitnaa tavazun rakhaa hay ALLAH nay...:).
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yeh tu bilkul sahi kah aap nayy