Yeh jo hum mai tum mai nibah hay, mere hoslay ka kamaal hay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Woh nazar say door tou hain magar
Yeh ajeeb soorat e haal hay
Ham’ah waqt paishe nazar bhi hain
Na firaq hay na wasaal hay
Yeh tumhari talkh navaian
Koi aur seh k dikha tou day
Yeh jo hum mai, tum mai nibah hay
Mere hoslay ka kamaal hay
Jo guzar rahi hay guzar do
Na bura kaho na gila kero
Jo tumhara haal hay dosto
Wuhi saray shehar ka haal hay
Mai kahan say laaon wo roshni
Jo kisi k shehar mai lut gai
Wo kisi ka shehar bhi lut gia
Mujhay is ka aur malaal hay
Tere mushwaray k khloos per
mujhay tark e ishq qabool hay
Magar aik baat hay hum-nasheen
Meri zindagi ka sawaal hay!!!
Woh nazar say door tou hain magar…

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wah nabss bohat koob

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*Sooooooooooppppppeeeeeeeerrrrrrrr ...... it doesn't feel that r u new here ? *

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Wah...simply great. Thanks.

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Thanks everyone,,Himmat afzai ka shukria

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Yeh jo hum mai, tum mai nibah hay
Mere hoslay ka kamaal hay

very nice sharing.........one of my favr8........thnx !

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Thanks reet

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..................keep it up nabiha...........................such a fantastic rythem of poetry...............keep sharing..........khush raho

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awwwwwwwwww rabia thankyou so much sis,,

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1Nabiha superb balke very superb, bt tell me 1 thing is it complete here
Woh nazar say door tou hain magar…

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Nice one :k:

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Thanks sad effect and prince ali,,

Jee sad effect, it is completed here.

Woh nazar say door tou hain magar....................<!-- / message -->

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i mean 2 say y it stopped here it should b continue coz it seems 2 b very smooth in reading.

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is ko sirf nice likhna mere liye kafi nahi hoga is ki tareef main aap ki nazar ik apna shair apni dairy se

wo shakhass bhee uth geya mehfil se mere uthh jane ke baad
shyaad us ka dil bhee dukhaa mera dil dukhanee ke baad
(jonaid)

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hammmmmmmmmm hamm
nice

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Thanks,,