mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhay aaiine ki sazaa na day
yehi shart Tehri teri agar, koi kaisay qeemat adaa karay!
na khabar hi teri lagay mujhe, na pata hi apna chalay mujhay
yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaaN, yeh andheraa bai’Hr-e-vujood kaa
na vo mun rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
SJ
August 2, 2007, 7:13am
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mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhay aaiine ki sazaa na day
main bujhaa chukaa hun nigaah-o-dil, mujhay raushni ki du'aa na day
**yehi shart Tehri teri agar, koi kaisay qeemat adaa karay!
yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day**
na khabar hi teri lagay mujhe, na pata hi apna chalay mujhay
yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz-o-shab ki hawaa na day
**yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaaN, yeh andheraa bai'Hr-e-vujood kaa
yahaan mauj Khud se hai be-Khabar, yeh jazeera koi basaa na laY**
na vo mun rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de
har shair bay-hud khobsorat..............amazing ghazal sis....:)
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AQ
August 2, 2007, 7:13am
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WoW... I always look for poems with such rythm and expressions.. Superb!
Shaair kaa naam kiyaa hai, if you know?
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
Buhat Khoobsurat.. :)
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
superb
best of the best competition aisya hi to nahin jeet liya
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
boht khoub shab:)
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
na khabar hi teri lagay mujhe, na pata hi apna chalay mujhay
nice sharing shab:)
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
Boht khoob !!
Amal
August 2, 2007, 1:41pm
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Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhay aaiine ki sazaa na day
yehi shart Tehri teri agar, koi kaisay qeemat adaa karay!
na khabar hi teri lagay mujhe, na pata hi apna chalay mujhay
yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaaN, yeh andheraa bai’Hr-e-vujood kaa
na vo mun rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
Bohat khoob Shab-e-Hijar :k: Hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye shukriya :~)
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
na khabar hi teri lagay mujhe, na pata hi apna chalay mujhay
yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz-o-shab ki hawaa na day
nice sharing :)
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
WoW… I always look for poems with such rythm and expressions.. Superb!
Shaair kaa naam kiyaa hai, if you know?
pata nahi
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
thanks all
Sheal
August 3, 2007, 7:42pm
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Very beautiful :k: thanks for sending the link
Re: yeh jo aarzuu-e-shikast hai, kahiN qarz-e-jaaN hi chukaa na day
bohat khoob :)
