~yeh jo aarzoo-e-shikast hai, kahin qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na dey~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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mera aks, aks bikhar gayaa, mujhe aaiine ki saza na de
main bujhaa chukaa hun nigaah_o_dil, mujhe roshni ki du’a na dey

           yehi shart Tehri tiri agar, koi kaise qeemat adaa kare!
           yeh jo aarzoo-e-shikast hai, kahin qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na dey

           
           na khabar hi teri lage mujhe, na pata hi apna chale mujhe
           yeh jo silsila hai talaash kaa, use roz_o_shab ki hawa na dey

           
           yeh talaatum_aashnaa kashtiyaan, yeh andheraa bai'Hr-e-vujood
           kaa
           yahaan mauj Khud se hai be_Khabar, yeh jazeera koi basaa na dey

           
           na vo man rahaa, na vo tan rahaa, na vo mausamoN ka jatan rahaa
           ram-e-aahuu sarf-e-Khotan rahaa, tu fareb koi nayaa na de

           
           kisi qaaide men na rakh mujhe, meri qadr kiaa? tu zaleel kar!
           main 'adoo hoon  teri byaaz ka, mite "jharna_jee" to sadaa na dey

~faqat aapki aaraa, islaah aur hausalah_afzaai ka mutamanni~

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This is just a marvellous contribution and you really deserve :k::k::k:
Nice work and keep on sharing !

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Bahut shukria iss hosala afazai o tareef ka ash e rawan ~~

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no..no…
you dont need to thank your post is really beautiful :k:

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Shukria kehna tu hamari tehzeeb main hae or phir ye hamaray baroon ki tarbiyat main bhi hae ashk e rawan mohataramo mohatrama~

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Lagta hai meri post kisi ko pasand hi nahin aee sirf ashk e rawan nay hi daad dena munasib samgha baki sub :~~~(

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Jharna~jhankar: *
Lagta hai meri post kisi ko pasand hi nahin aee sirf ashk e rawan nay hi daad dena munasib samgha baki sub :~~~(
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udas hone ki zaroorat nahee hai jharna, abhi bahut se members aise hain jinhoo ne ap ki post ko visit nahee kiya

udas mat ho khush raho

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Ashk-e-Rawan: *

udas hone ki zaroorat nahee hai jharna, abhi bahut se members aise hain jinhoo ne ap ki post ko visit nahee kiya

udas mat ho khush raho
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aap ki iss meharbani ka shukria pur aap ki itlaah key liye arz hae key iss wuqt beyshumar memebers aee or visit karkay jachukay hein pur kisi ney reply munasib na samgha
khush tu mein rehti hoon :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Jharna~jhankar: *

aap ki iss meharbani ka shukria pur aap ki itlaah key liye arz hae key iss wuqt beyshumar memebers aee or visit karkay jachukay hein pur kisi ney reply munasib na samgha
khush tu mein rehti hoon :)
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is baat ki kya guarantee hai ke beshumaar members visit kar chuke hain? kya pata kisi ko itni pasand agae ho ke us ka baar baar parhne ko dil chahata ho...

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Ashk-e-Rawan: *

is baat ki kya guarantee hai ke beshumaar members visit kar chuke hain? kya pata kisi ko itni pasand agae ho ke us ka baar baar parhne ko dil chahata ho...
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mumkin nahin agur kisi ko itni pasand ati tu aik reply hi kar jata :(
aur aesa kaun hai jis ka dil chahata ho meri is ghazul ko parhata rahay?

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each and every word is well said.... thanks for sharing it....

keep it up please.....

Khuda khush rakhay aap koo....

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Re: ~yeh jo aarzoo-e-shikast hai, kahin qarz-e-jaan hi chukaa na dey~

Well, it leaves me wondering. Is jesi hi aek
khoobsoorat ghazal pehley bhi kai baar nazar sey
guzri hey, gaaleban Bashir Badr sahab ki. Lekin
aap ki kaavish bhi yaqeenan qaabil-e-tehseen
hey:k:…hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye
be’had shukriya:)

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lajvab kavish hai jharna jhankar apke

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really nice:k:

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:eek::eek::eek::eek:

Amal sahi kah rahay hain ** bashir badar** hi ki hai
woh ghazal kuch din pahlay ki paglee ya koyal main say kisi nay post
ki thi .. 99% asi hi thi :slight_smile:
anywayz

keep it up ** JJ** sis :k: