-- yeh dil udaas o bay qaraar hay...

Do Batain…

khabardaar agar kisi nay mazaal uraaya to :smokin:
long time ago I was used to be the Poet of NEWS(North East West South) but then I left the field of poetry for new blood…
after a long time aaj shairi ki rag pharki aur aik Taaza taazaa kalaam hazir hay, Jiss ko pasand na aaya wo mera dushman, aur jissay pasand aaya wo mera [email protected]
anyway aik fazool si kuch baatain, jaldi main yehi aaya zehan main lol ]

kia wajah hay koi to baat hay
koi waada to nahi kia lekin…
jaanay kiyon kisi ka intaizaar hay
ik ik aahat par chonk jaanaa
naam poochay koi to unn ka naam zaban par ana
kabhi khud hi hansna aur kabhi ashkon ka rawaan hojana
kabhi to Gulon say hans hans kay baatain karna
to kabhi kanton ko ungli main chubo laina
do pal ka milan aur khushi say bhara daaman
q bhool jaata hoon iss pal say aglay pal ko aakhir

wawawawa

:rolleyes: :rolleyes:

welcome here..jin ka intzaar hia wo yahan nahi lagta hia chalie gayen :stuck_out_tongue:

nice one though..:slight_smile:

ata bahii nice to see you posting somehting aur woh bhi ur own:flower1:
ap do baatein karein yah teen hum sunanay ke liye hazer hain:~)

** khabardaar agar kisi nay mazaal uraaya to :smoki n:**

mazaal nahi mazaak:hehe: itnay confused kion ho gayay hain abhi to sirf ap ne apne poetry pesh ke hai:D
waise ache poetry ko fazool nahi kehtay:nono:
anyways bohut bol lee jahan tak apke poetry ka sawal hai woh bohut khoobsoorat hai:k::k:
keep it up:flower1:

hein tumhein ata bahii ka intazar tha:eek::smiley:

ghor se parhiey koyal ko intzaar nahi tha koyal ne likha JIN ko thaa..:stuck_out_tongue:

PS: koyal kisi ka intzar nahi karti kabhi :slight_smile:

koyal aap :slight_smile: hehe mujhay to nahi tha kisi ka intaizar :stuck_out_tongue: bass aisay hi …aur aap ka shukria hamaray koochay main tashreef laanay ka :wink: aur yeh kia janaab…koyal q nahi karti kisi ka intazaar ? :frowning:

**Ghazal ** haan na baba I was nervous na…was presenting live shairii on air…waisay to Azaad shairi bohat ki hay cafe main :smiley:
but socha kay chali iss section main bhi…aur thanks but I know its very below standard of you guys, aap log saaray yahan to zabardast shairs hain main kahan hehe waisay shukran :flower1:

sari umar dil ko baghal main dabay phiro gay to udass to uss bicharay na hona hi hay.

:crying: bevafa loggg :snooty: mei nehe boltee ab :crying:

Re: – yeh dil udaas o bay qaraar hay…

okieeees mei dushman sehee hon pher :hehe: :stuck_out_tongue:
mazaq ker rehee

bhaee achee try hei :slight_smile:

Mola teri hiqmat hay … moa’jza humaray Ehid main bhi zahir howa

:silly:

aisay humaray naseeb kahan :frowning:

achi koshish hai :k:

:hehe:..

nice:flower1:…

Re: – yeh dil udaas o bay qaraar hay…

:eek: appp yahannn :mudhosh:
aur shairi bhi :eek:
bhut khoubsourt batein likhi hain :slight_smile:
wagah mein bataonnn :wink: :stuck_out_tongue:

bahut khoob pakistan zindabad ji !

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
sari umar dil ko baghal main dabay phiro gay to udass to uss bicharay na hona hi hay.
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apnay he baghal main dab kar phir rahay hain na aap kay dill ke tarahah tu nahi....

Very nice and nice to see you on poetry forum.....

Not bad :D
keep it up :)

tum itne sungdil to nahi lagte:hoonh: ke tum kese ka intazar na karo:D