yeh charagh chahton key

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 6:23am

yeh charagh chahton key
jo hawa mein jal rhay hain
inhien kab talak sambhalien
chalo phir sey torr daalien
wo tamam ehad o paimaan
k
main tujh mein jee rha hon
k
too mujh mein bass rha hai

being_lonely · October 22, 2007, 6:25am

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wot is it a song ?

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 9:33am

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^^ song bhi ho sakta hai ab mujhay to nahin pata :)

SJ · October 22, 2007, 9:35am

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Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 9:37am

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aap ki yad dasht phir kho gai kaya

mustaqbil main bhi koi ga sakta hai ye koi pabandi to nahin

SJ · October 22, 2007, 9:39am

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hmmm.............
may be......waisay nice poem Ali Bhai:)

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 9:42am

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yaad aa gaya poem ka aap ko Soniaa sis :)

SJ · October 22, 2007, 9:42am

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:)
yaad tou tha magar yaad nahin raha:D

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 9:44am

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jaldi se dawa kha lo abhi se ye haal hai to budhi ho kar kaya banay ga aap ka

SJ · October 22, 2007, 9:46am

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zindage ka pal mein pata nahin kya say kya ho jaiy…burhapa kis nay dekha hai…
bataya na badaam khatee hon mein

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 9:50am

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umeed-e-barhapa rakho aur qadam uthaye chalo
ungliyon ke saath keybaord ko daurraye chalo

:smokin:

SJ · October 22, 2007, 9:52am

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:aq:
phir smoking kaha na…mujhay nahin acha lagtaa iss ka dhuaan:snooty:

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 9:56am

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shair per ghaur karo

kaya dhuwain ki wajah se wo nazar nahin aaya

SJ · October 22, 2007, 9:58am

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ajeeb sa shair hai:aq:

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 10:01am

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be qadaray laug

SJ · October 22, 2007, 10:08am

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na qadray hota hai shayad:aq:

arsalanh2000 · October 22, 2007, 10:39am

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NICE shair,

Ali ap bhi kin logon ki baaton mein aa gaiay :)

arsalanh2000 · October 22, 2007, 10:42am

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Good correction Madam ji, Lagta hay Ali becharay ki khair nahein hay

Ali_2 · October 22, 2007, 10:50am

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whatever matlab samajh aa gaya na

thanks

aray apnay hi logon ki batoon main aaye hain

Prince_Ali · October 22, 2007, 7:34pm

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nice :k: