Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Aaj aek puraani ghazal nazar aai. YuN to ye ghazal aek baar pehley bhi Gupshup pe post ho chuki hey, lekin phir khayaal aaya ke kiuN na isey aek baar phir aap logoN ki nazroN sey guzaara jaaey :slight_smile:

** -------------------------------------- Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey! ye jo dil sey utth raha hey, ye dhuwaaN nahi to kya hey!

tujhey kis dard ki shiddat merey dar pe kheench laai
tujhey kis ney keh diya tha merey paas har dawaa hey!

terey kisi dukh ka chaaraa merey haath meiN nahi hey
meiN to khud bekaraaN hooN merey paas kya dharaa hey

abhi bastiyaaN yaheeN heiN, tu loat jaa yaheeN sey
merey saath saath na chal tu, ye bohat barra juwa hey

tujhey kya khabar aey hamdam ke teri aarzu ke badly
merey dil pe jo laga tha, ab tak wo zakhm haraa hey

par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi ‘kami’ hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey

meiN koi waaqeya nahi hooN, mujhey is tarhaN na socho
meri daastaaN ko chorro, bhala is meiN kya maza hey

tu laot ke aa gayaa hey, par mera dil to bujh chuka hey
ab tu kisi aur sey pyaar kar ley, bas yehi teri sazaa hey

By: Amal**

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amalllllllllllllll bhaeeeeeeee bohttttt bohttttttttttt acheiiiiiiiiiii heiiiiiiii meiiii nei toh pehlei bar parhi heiiiiiiiiiiiiiii .thankoooooooooooooo:)

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Amal I read it before as well and its no doubt beautiful....I have a safarish....saza thoree kam kar do na...yeh to zulam ziyaditee hai...Kuch Khuda ka khauf karo :)

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par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi 'kami' hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey
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:) Beautiful Poem Amal! , but this last one, u saying....

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tu laot ke aa gayaa hey, par mera dil to bujh chuka hey
ab tu kisi aur sey pyaar kar ley, bas yehi teri sazaa hey
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Did u really say it? :D, i doubt, One cant!

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Cap, safarish buri baat :nono: … but thanx for liking the ghazal again :slight_smile:

one never knows :wink:

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Re: Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey!

bohat khoob amal :k:

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Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *

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par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi 'kami' hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey
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:) Beautiful Poem Amal! , but this last one, u saying....

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tu laot ke aa gayaa hey, par mera dil to bujh chuka hey
ab tu kisi aur sey pyaar kar ley, bas yehi teri sazaa hey
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Did u really say it? :D, i doubt, One cant!
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Amjab bhai gussay main to banda kuch bhi kahdeta hai ;)

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Amal jee…humhesha ki tarha is baar bhi…:k:

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yoon to sari ghazal hi khoobsurat hai magar yeh asha'r to lajwab hain!!!

tujhey kya khabar aey hamdam ke teri aarzu ke badlay
merey dil pe jo laga tha, ab tak wo zakhm haraa hey

terey kisi dukh ka chaaraa merey haath meiN nahi hey
meiN to khud bekaraaN hooN merey paas kya dharaa hey

par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi 'kami' hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

Amjab bhai gussay main to banda kuch bhi kahdeta hai ;)
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hey chando g kesi batin ap dono kartey me tu gussay main be aisay na kahay kabhi..:)

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Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts:

par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi 'kami' hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey

Beautiful Poem Amal! , but this last one, u saying....

tu laot ke aa gayaa hey, par mera dil to bujh chuka hey
ab tu kisi aur sey pyaar kar ley, bas yehi teri sazaa hey

Did u really say it? , i doubt, One cant!/ quote:]

i agree with u Amjad bahi ....me not even doubt..me sure about that k one can't.......keon ** Amal ** ;)

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Re: Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

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par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi 'kami' hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey

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hamari nazaron se ye almost har dosray din he guzarti....Beautiful like always.....:)

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bhut achay:k:

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wonderful Amal jee…loved every part of it:k:

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Re: Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *
Aaj aek puraani ghazal nazar aai. YuN to ye ghazal aek baar pehley bhi Gupshup pe post ho chuki hey, lekin phir khayaal aaya ke kiuN na isey aek baar phir aap logoN ki nazroN sey guzaara jaaey :)

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tujhey kis dard ki shiddat merey dar pe kheench laai
tujhey kis ney keh diya tha merey paas har dawaa hey!

abhi bastiyaaN yaheeN heiN, tu loat jaa yaheeN sey
merey saath saath na chal tu, ye bohat barra juwa hey

tujhey kya khabar aey hamdam ke teri aarzu ke badly
merey dil pe jo laga tha, ab tak wo zakhm haraa hey

meiN koi waaqeya nahi hooN, mujhey is tarhaN na socho
meri daastaaN ko chorro, bhala is meiN kya maza hey

By: Amal**
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hameesha ki tarah buhat khoobsorat :)

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Re: Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *
Aaj aek puraani ghazal nazar aai. YuN to ye ghazal aek baar pehley bhi Gupshup pe post ho chuki hey, lekin phir khayaal aaya ke kiuN na isey aek baar phir aap logoN ki nazroN sey guzaara jaaey :)

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Ye weham nahi to kya hey, ye gumaaN nahi to kya hey!
ye jo dil sey utth raha hey, ye dhuwaaN nahi to kya hey!

tujhey kis dard ki shiddat merey dar pe kheench laai
tujhey kis ney keh diya tha merey paas har dawaa hey!

terey kisi dukh ka chaaraa merey haath meiN nahi hey
meiN to khud bekaraaN hooN merey paas kya dharaa hey

abhi bastiyaaN yaheeN heiN, tu loat jaa yaheeN sey
merey saath saath na chal tu, ye bohat barra juwa hey

tujhey kya khabar aey hamdam ke teri aarzu ke badly
merey dil pe jo laga tha, ab tak wo zakhm haraa hey

par gila nahi hey tujh sey, merey khaloos meiN hi 'kami' hey
meiN ney jisey bhi dil sey chaaha, usey laga ke wo khuda hey

meiN koi waaqeya nahi hooN, mujhey is tarhaN na socho
meri daastaaN ko chorro, bhala is meiN kya maza hey

tu laot ke aa gayaa hey, par mera dil to bujh chuka hey
ab tu kisi aur sey pyaar kar ley, bas yehi teri sazaa hey

By: Amal**
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aw beautiful yaar bohet ache very nice

acha tumhari shayari tubohet ach he hi but i like ur avator very much the guy eeee he is cute ;)

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I must admit that its a wonderful contribution here.... Keep it up and continue sharing with us !

Nice choice :)

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Thanx a lot guys…all credit to my readers:flower1::slight_smile:

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Buhat Umda, Thanks fir sharing :)

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hmmmmm, zabardast :k: :k:

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yum to aap ki ye ghazal pahle bhii padh chuka hoon Amal Sahab.
bahot achhi hai.
phir se daad kubul kijiye.