Dil ka jurm mohabut hay ye mantay hain
Mayray saray shikasta khawab
Ansoon main ub tu bah chukay hain
Suno jan
Ye tu bahut hi ajeeb qisa hay
Na tu aap hi budaltay hain
Na mug main bay wafai ki sukat hay
Ye goongay sunaaty bhi cheekh cheekh kur kahtay hain
Ye Tyra Naseeb Ye Mayra Naseeb
Goeya bheegta kajal ho
Aur muskarana lazim ho
i guess it gives feelings as kisi lurki nay ye poem likhi ho, yes though i wrote it but it was “she” talking in me! 
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Goeya bheegta kajal ho
Aur muskarana lazim ho
beautiful…:k:
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*Ye Tyra Naseeb Ye Mayra Naseeb
Goeya bheegta kajal ho
Aur muskarana lazim ho
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Wahh !! 
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Ye Tyra Naseeb Ye Mayra Naseeb Goeya bheegta kajal ho Aur muskarana lazim ho
i guess it gives feelings as kisi lurki nay ye poem likhi ho, yes though i wrote it but it was "she" talking in me! :)
Buhat khub BB,:)
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bebasi:hayaa:khush:confused:
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Goeya bheegta kajal ho
Aur Muskurana lazim ho Mamun! ye toy ly do na jab os ka bacha khta ho Os ka kajal bheegta ho Mera muskurana lazim ho................:( Ye Tyra Naseeb Ye Mayra Naseeb
Addab Araz :)
lugta hay aap kaafi Experienced hain iss main :D
To be very honest, i didnt like k itni piayri si poem ko aap kisi aur turaf lay jaeya jaye, and if i have been MOD i would have edited your post....
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Shukriya Muslim Girl and Hearthacker :)
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Dil ka jurm mohabut hay ye mantay hain Mayray saray shikasta khawab Ansoon main ub tu bah chukay hain Suno jan Ye tu bahut hi ajeeb qisa hay Na tu aap hi budaltay hain Na mug main bay wafai ki sukat hay Ye goongay sunaaty bhi cheekh cheekh kur kahtay hain Ye Tyra Naseeb Ye Mayra Naseeb Goeya bheegta kajal ho Aur muskarana lazim ho
i guess it gives feelings as kisi lurki nay ye poem likhi ho, yes though i wrote it but it was "she" talking in me! :)
BB its very nice poem, sometimes palak nok nahi sanwarni chahiye main thing is idea jo keh acha hay, keep it up and dont forget to share :-)
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Shukriya. As i said, main Poet tu hoon nahi, phir couldnt be a perfect shair or poem, just jo dill aur damagh main aata, i just write it, and if it sounds good it is because of? :) so obvious!
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Amjad bhai chaa gaey heiN aap to…kya baat hey :k: chutti kar di aap ney to sab ki really bohat achi poem hey…keep it up aur hum sey share karna na bhoolye ga
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Lo ji … :halo: yes poem aachi hay i do accept but baqi sub ki chutti wali baat thek nahi hay. ooh haan ho sukta hay mahwaratun aap nay kaha ho, phir theek hay , as manay times said that i am not a poet. aur idher tu bahut say loog jo really poet hain
yes will keep shairing…
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lugta hay aap kaafi Experienced hain iss main :D
To be very honest, i didnt like k itni piayri si poem ko aap kisi aur turaf lay jaeya jaye, and if i have been MOD i would have edited your post....
jab sab baggyr experience ky shairi kr sakty hain tu mera experienced hona kysy sabit:D khyr MOD ko takleef mat din ;) magar yad rhy Anwar Maqsood ny PS ki kobako phyl gai bat shnasai ki pyrodi ki hy I hope perodies are not forbiddon here:D
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Love ji pehli or akhri dfa tum sy ajzi sy kh rhi hon delet kro mera quote tumhary quote sy
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Very nice :k:
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Khooob Jee :)
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ajzi khan he:confused:
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lugta hay aap kaafi Experienced hain iss main :D
To be very honest, i didnt like k itni piayri si poem ko aap kisi aur turaf lay jaeya jaye, and if i have been MOD i would have edited your post....
beshak experience ki limits hain:D
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Yhan hon
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i said where is ajzi in ur quote:confused:
