..............ye Shahr E Tamanna Tou..!

Hazereen e mahfil…aadab,
Nazm…aap sab ke liye… !

…" SHAHR PATHAR KA "…

**YE SHAHR E TAMANNA TOU, **
EK SHAHR HAI PATHAR KA-
PHIR, SHAHR E TAMANNA SE,
KYUN RAKHTE HO UMEEDEN !

YAN RASM BHI PATHAR KI,
UMEEDEN HAIN PATHAR KI,
KANTE BHI HAIN PATHAR KE,
YAN PHOOL BHI PATHREELAY,

ASNAAM BHI PATHAR KE
INAAM BHI PATHREELAY..
HAIN KHALQ TO PATHAR KE,
EKHLAAQ BHI PATHRELAY !

YAN FARSH TO THA PATHAR
AUR ARSH BHI PATHREELAY,
MAAYEN BHI HAIN PATHAR KI,
BACHHE BHI HAIN PATHREELAY !

PATHAR KA NAGAR DEKHA,
PATHAR KA JIGAR DEKHA,
‘MAKE UP’ KA KOHAR LEKAR,
RUKHSAAR BHI PATHREELAY !

MASHRIQ SE TOU GHABRAYE,
MASHRIQ SE YUN LALCHAAYE,
AANE KO YAHAN AAYE…
PAR AAKE BHI PACHTAYE !

AB WAQT YEH KAHTA HAI,
AAGE HI BARHE JAAO…
PEECHHAY JO KABHI DEKHA.
HO JAAOGE PATHAR KE … !!!


enjoy…and feel free to comment !

Re: …ye Shahr E Tamanna Tou..!

darwesh Gupshup par khus’aamdeed :slight_smile: Bohat achi aur gehri nazm likhi hey aap ney. Acha andaa-e-fikr hey. Nice to have you on board. Keep sharing your work with us :slight_smile: On a side note, please don’t type in UPPERCASE, that makes reading difficult. Thanx :slight_smile:

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Jigar Bhai Amal....Aadab,
Nazm ki pasandedgi ka shukriya, hauslaafzai ke liye mashkoor hun.
Apki Nazmen bhi main bare shouq se parh raha hun, doosre silsile bhi khoob hain, khoob guzregi jo mil baithenge dewaane do.......
apka darwesh !

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DASH Ji !
** Who kisi ny dua ki thi na ky,**
"Khuda Lutfy biyan lutfy zban gar dy tu itna dy
** Dilon main arzo ban kr utr jay sukhan apna"**
Sannan agar khty hain ky ap sy mutasir ho kr shairi shuro ki tu buja nahi ap ka klam prh kr tu waqi shairi krny ku ji chata hy.Allah ny ap ko lutfy biyan o zban dono sy nwaza hy MashaAllah.
Mer akhiyal hy ky khny ki zaroorat nahi ky Buhat Umda Klam hy:)

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AB WAQT YEH KAHTA HAI,
AAGE HI BARHE JAAO.......

PEECHHAY JO KABHI DEKHA.
HO JAAOGE PATHAR KE .... !!!

Wah brother darwesh bari pathreeli nazam likh mari hay aap nay ..... akhri she'r parh kar mujhay dadi amaan key sunai gai kahanayan yaad aagien kah mur kay daikha to pathar kay ho jao gay .....

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Wah Sannan ki a bat khi hy Pathrieeli nazam ki or han mujhy bhi yad a gain sari kahaniya of Alf Lyla .Hatim tai ki khani main th ashaid woh shehr ky pichy dykho gy tu pathar ky ban jao gy,
"Kohy Nida" nam tha os shehr ka.

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Sannan Jigar Aur G-N Saheba,,, Tasleemaat !
Nazm Ki Pasandeedgi Ka Shukriya, bari purani File Khol Dali Aap donon Ne, Main To Bhool Hi Gaya Tha, Ke Yeh Nazm Yahan Post Hui Hai.
Khair Der Aayed Durast Aayed... Nawazish.

darwesh.