ye qadam qadam teRi aa'hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

NikamiJano · April 18, 2003, 1:40pm

kisi sheR maiN na uter sakaY teRay rang teRi saba’hataiN
kisi haRf maiN be na dhal sakaiN teRi khwab khwab refa’qtaiN

mujhaY yuN be zu’am sakhuN na tha k ye meRa shewa fun na tha
teRay roO’barOo rahin surkhro meRay aa’jaz fun ki nidaa’mtaiN

koi aisa phool k khil sakaY meRi aa’rzoo k day’yaaR maiN
koi aisa khawab k day sakaY mujhay subha noO ki bashartaiN

ye talsim-e-deed ka rang hia k ja’nooN ka koi taRang hai
ye qadam qadam teRi aa’hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

meray rooz-o-shab ki na pooch tu teRay baad aiey gham aa’rzoo
na ragooN maiN daRd ki hidataiN na shidataiN na wo raa’hataiN

ye nahi k sirf mujhi pe haiN meRay paish Ro be bhughat chukaY
meRay shehaR teRi nawazishaiN meRi jaaN ! teRi anaa’yataiN

Lamhay · April 18, 2003, 1:54pm

bahut khoob siso !thanks 4 sharing

Pramod · April 18, 2003, 2:27pm

ye talsim-e-deed ka rang hia k ja'nooN ka koi taRang hai
ye qadam qadam teRi aa'hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

meray rooz-o-shab ki na pooch tu teRay baad aiey gham aa'rzoo
na ragooN maiN daRd ki hidataiN na shidataiN na wo raa'hataiN

kya baat hai Bahna. Your this choice is really beautiful.
thanks for sharing.....................

hanie · April 18, 2003, 3:26pm

ye talsim-e-deed ka rang hia k ja’nooN ka koi taRang hai
ye qadam qadam teRi aa’hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

wah nikammi,
kya baat ki haye! :k:

WiseGuy · April 18, 2003, 3:54pm

Re: ye qadam qadam teRi aa'hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

kisi sheR maiN na uter sakaY teRay rang teRi saba'hataiN
kisi haRf maiN be na dhal sakaiN teRi khwab khwab refa'qtaiN

mujhaY yuN be zu'am sakhuN na tha k ye meRa shewa fun na tha
teRay roO'barOo rahin surkhro meRay aa'jaz fun ki nidaa'mtaiN

koi aisa phool k khil sakaY meRi aa'rzoo k day'yaaR maiN
koi aisa khawab k day sakaY mujhay subha noO ki bashartaiN

ye talsim-e-deed ka rang hia k ja'nooN ka koi taRang hai
ye qadam qadam teRi aa'hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

meray rooz-o-shab ki na pooch tu teRay baad aiey gham aa'rzoo
na ragooN maiN daRd ki hidataiN na shidataiN na wo raa'hataiN

ye nahi k sirf mujhi pe haiN meRay paish Ro be bhughat chukaY
meRay shehaR teRi nawazishaiN meRi jaaN ! teRi anaa'yataiN
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Wah wah Janu Jee
Bohat Khoob... :):):)
Thanks for sharing...

Amal · April 18, 2003, 4:47pm

Re: ye qadam qadam teRi aa’hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

NikamiJi be’had khoobsoorat ghazal hey:k:…hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya:)

ASA · April 18, 2003, 4:54pm

ahaa.. as usual... a very nice 1 here

:)

Capricorn · April 18, 2003, 5:08pm

Re: ye qadam qadam teRi aa’hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

Wah kia baat hai nikii :k:

chand_chehra · April 18, 2003, 6:01pm

bohat hi khusburat ghazal hai janno gi :k:

_Nazish · April 19, 2003, 12:51am

wah…lajavaaab

Mehvar · April 19, 2003, 2:03am

wah ji wah:k:kool man:)

Eastern_Thoughts · April 19, 2003, 7:20am

Zuberdust....... Unique wishes :)

dil kaise usse bhoole!
jis naam ki khushbu se saansoN meN parheN jhoole
dil kaise usse bhoole!

hai aankh ajab uss ki, dil leti chali jaye
lahra ke dhhanak uss ke aanchal meN utar aaye
aawaaz meN shola woh, akaash ko jo chhoo le
dil kaise usse bhoole!

bazaar meN duniya ke tujh sa na haseeN dekhha
ham ne tujhe dekha to kuchh aur nahiN dekha
jo tujh ko passand aaye, ai jan-e-wafa, tu le
dil kaise usse bhoole
jis naam ki khusbu se saansoN meN parheN jhoole
dil kaise usse bhoole!

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 19, 2003, 10:49am

boht khob he nikamijee:)

abc1234 · April 19, 2003, 12:01pm

:k:

NikamiJano · April 19, 2003, 10:51pm

thanks Lamhay sis...AsweetA...Honey...Nazish...Mehver...:)

and irem and welcome here:) in poetry sec..:)

NikamiJano · April 19, 2003, 10:52pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *
boht khob he nikamijee:)
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thanks mashoom g ap kahan hoti me mish u na :(

NikamiJano · April 19, 2003, 11:12pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *

Zuberdust....... Unique wishes :)

dil kaise usse bhoole!
jis naam ki khushbu se saansoN meN parheN jhoole
dil kaise usse bhoole!

hai aankh ajab uss ki, dil leti chali jaye
lahra ke dhhanak uss ke aanchal meN utar aaye
aawaaz meN shola woh, akaash ko jo chhoo le
dil kaise usse bhoole!

bazaar meN duniya ke tujh sa na haseeN dekhha
ham ne tujhe dekha to kuchh aur nahiN dekha
jo tujh ko passand aaye, ai jan-e-wafa, tu le
dil kaise usse bhoole
jis naam ki khusbu se saansoN meN parheN jhoole
dil kaise usse bhoole!

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thanks ap ki wishes and nice nazam..:)

aa'nkh jab taak hai nazaaRay ki talab hai
teRi khushbo ko maiN kis zoaq nazaR se dekhoN

NikamiJano · April 19, 2003, 11:12pm

thanks chando g…

NikamiJano · April 19, 2003, 11:14pm

Re: Re: ye qadam qadam teRi aa’hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi surataiN

shukria capo…roze aik gazal na likh dya karen hum ap aien gain tu isi bahanay..

NikamiJano · April 19, 2003, 11:22pm

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Aymal behad thanks k ap ko Nikamy logo ki choose ke hiweu chezain pasand a jati…